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- MSIS Masters Information Sciences, Morocco
MSIS Masters Information Sciences, Morocco When I was a child in Morocco, a personal computer was considered a luxury. I spent a lot of my spare time at ‘cyber cafes’ using a computer for an hour or two and became totally fascinated with these mysterious machines. I wanted to know how this little box in front of me performed the miracle of moving information and thoughts instantly around the globe. I decided that I would find out and that is what I have spent my life to date doing. My initial fascination increases day by day and I have never regretted my decision to work in IT. All of my adult academic and working life has been devoted to I.T. During that time, I have advanced from a ‘helpdesk’ role to Director of I.T. and have acquired a bachelor degree in Network and Communications Management with an impressive GPA. I have treated each job I have had as the opportunity to add to my knowledge and skills and as a ‘stepping stone’ to the very top of the profession. My goal now is to take a major step in my professional journey by joining an excellent MSIS program, excel within it and then to fill a senior management role. I intend, ultimately, to pursue a Ph.D. degree to enable me to conduct and supervise research and to teach. I hold a bachelor degree in Network and Communication Management with a GPA of 3.51 and was included on the Dean’s List of graduates. I believe that this will provide an assurance that I am both an intelligent and diligent student with a genuine passion for my subject who has the academic potential to benefit from the MSIS program. My work to date has provided exposure to IT applications in several different environments including aerospace, hospitality, NOC’s and education. This breadth of experience has been extremely useful to me and I look forward to sharing the fruits of my experience with my class in the program. My experience on a helpdesk gave me the opportunity to learn and apply basic communication skills and these have been honed as I have progressed into supervisory and management roles. My background has convinced me that among the most important characteristics of an effective manager are decisiveness and a readiness to lead by example. I consider management to be a fascinating art and I am keen to learn as much as possible about how to exercise it to maximum effect. Although I have not yet had the opportunity to undertake research, I am very keen to do so. I believe that the progress that I have made professionally has been the result of demonstrating the characteristics required of a good researcher. I am determined, patient, analytical and able to think ‘outside the box’. I am particularly interested in assisting with research into e-Government and Business Informatics. I have carefully researched the programs available to me and have concluded that your own is the best fit to enable me to achieve my goals. I seek a challenging but supportive program in which I can apply the significant knowledge that I have gained in academic projects. I am attracted by the small class sizes and the concept of the ‘cohort’ to encourage effective collaboration and long term professional relationships. I am keen to be among students who share my passion and look forward to giving the benefit of my knowledge and skills to my classmates and benefitting from their experiences. I am aware of the work and interesting professional background of Dr. XXXX and I particularly look forward to working under her guidance. I know that participation in the program while holding a demanding job will involve sacrifices and dedication. Much of my spare time is, anyway, devoted to learning about the most recent advances in the IT world and so I am convinced that I can take on the necessary workload and undertake to apply all my determination and enthusiasm for my subject not only to complete the program but to excel within it. I have happily studied, worked and socialized with people from a wide variety of cultures and social backgrounds. I enjoy learning about other cultures and sharing knowledge of my own. I have enjoyed exposure to a variety of cultures in my extensive travels. I studied in Spain for a year and have visited several other countries including France, Italy, Brazil and Turkey. I speak Arabic, English, French and Spanish. I am aware that there will be many well qualified applicants for the program. However I consider myself to be an excellent candidate. I firmly believe that I have the academic potential, relevant professional experience, determination, diligence and intelligence to profit from the program. I also have a genuine desire to share, and work closely, with the like minded professionals who will make up my cohort. I undertake wholehearted participation in the program if selected and hope very much for the opportunity to join it. MSIS Masters Information Sciences, Morocco
- MBA Program Re-Application Low GMAT
MBA Program Re-Application Low GMAT I am re-applying to the MBA Program at UXX because my application was rejected last year due to my low GMAT Score. I am applying again because I feel strongly that the improvement that I have made and continue to make will now enable me to do well in your program by the time that I begin next year, in the Fall of 2013. I am especially confident that this is the case because I left my position in Saudi Arabia and I am now devoting myself full time to English acquisition. Quite frankly, I find the mastery of GMAT score to be one of the greatest challenges that I have ever faced. Still, now that I am fully immersed in the idiom, I am making enormous, rapid progress because I now live in the USA where I am preparing to re-take the GMAT on December 15th 2012. Now, I am almost certain that I will obtain a score that will be acceptable according to the standards of your program. I am especially grateful to the Saudi Higher Education Ministry for sponsoring my studies. I remember so clearly the night before leaving my family to pursue my Bachelor’s Degree in the United Kingdom. My father said a few words to me that still drive and motivate me to succeed: “You are my hero.” Without his words of encouragement, I might not have become the man I am today – the first in my immediate and extended family to study in the UK, to be a university graduate and to become an engineer. Such words of encouragement gave me the confidence to do my very best. Since returning to Saudi Arabia, after graduating from the University of Southampton with a Bachelor’s degree in Electrical Engineering, I have divided my time between working for the Advanced Electronics Company (AEC) and the development of my family’s expanding businesses. I have enjoyed my experience in the Engineering and Development Department at AEC as a System Engineer, where I earned a promotion after an exceptional year of performance and dedication. Before leaving the company, they offered me the position of Utility Management Sector leader, which would have involved the management of my own team and increasing my project responsibilities. While this position would have elevated me in my career path to Chief Engineer, I have decided that I want neither a lifelong career in utility management nor in engineering. I have found my greatest joy and fulfillment in the management of our family businesses and this is why I want very much to earn the MBA Degree, so that I will be able to learn from the best, the faculty at UCI, who I see as working on the cutting edge of research in business development. I have particularly enjoyed working to enhance our family restaurant, the Lebanese Corner and I am very excited by the market opportunities that exist in Saudi Arabia for ethnic food. I also plan to have a larger and more strategic role in our family’s business, Radyolla Group, which started its business from the food industry market, real estate and construction sector, to establishing overseas partnership with Chinese Company XXXX to develop Dafeng Port (China) and overseas financing. I was successful at opening our second restaurant with this name this past year and I gained a lot of hands-on experience in business development. I have learned enough to make me very excited about the prospect of a formal education in business. Obtaining the MBA from the XXXX School of Business will provide me not only the option to reroute my journey from engineering to business operations, but also to obtain the necessary skills and knowledge in marketing, human resources, finance, accounting, and strategy to grow my family’s business successfully. I see UXX’s well-rounded core curriculum, including courses such as Business Dynamics, Entrepreneurship, and Supply Chain Management, as the optimal springboard upon which to launch myself on a new career in business management. I thank you for consideration of my application. MBA Program Re-Application Low GMAT
- MS Engineering Medical Devices, Iranian
MS Engineering Medical Devices, Iranian I am an electrical engineer who has recently immigrated from Iran to the USA. I want very much to continue my studies on the graduate level here in my new home, California. It has always been my dream to be able to contribute to saving lives through the development of more effective medical instruments. I am currently employed in this area and my employer has recommended your program at UCXX for further study that will assist me in making increasingly valuable contributions to our company. I find the unique mix of Engineering, Medicine and Design very exciting. I love the rapid growth and tremendous potential of device design. I look forward to a lifetime of research in numerous applications on the forefront of the worlds of medicine and technology. In addition to the application of design technology and the latest biomaterials technology in developing implanted biomedical devices and computing and telecommunications. To help you understand my current professional goals and research interests better, I would like to first explain my educational experience up to this point. I have graduated from the Computer Engineering department at Islamic Azad University from Iran. I have always passion to design, it covers all area such as accessories for computer to medical devices’ and even architecture. I have always thought to modify the design of products to be more convenient to consumers. I started as IT specialist in some company and started to web designing. After a while I found out that my inclination for web designing is not something that satisfies me. I like to create real things. I want to be a device designer and I want to create them related to technology. My decision to pursue graduate studies in Medical Device Engineering was the natural culmination of my undergraduate coursework in computer engineering and having familiarity with design software such as CAD, Corel Draw, Free hand, Photoshop, etc. I started my job in XXXX Medical industry. The company that offers the most extensive product line of functional supports for body in Iran market place. Very soon in the company I was transferred to R&D department as Technician looking for new products in the world web market to bring it to production line in Iran. Having a passion to design lead me to modify some of the products design to an improved and upgraded one. Company manager encouraged me to take an Anatomy course in Medical school as extension. With having basic anatomy knowledge I got a promotion to modify products to consumer satisfaction based on feedback. Seeing that my grandmother and grandfather using the products that I modified and they are happy with that it is really satisfactory. During the two and a half years of my work in the company I gained a deep understanding of various fields in computer design, new materials and consumers satisfaction related to each other. My last two years before immigrating to the US had been elapsed in the Runiran Company that Manufacturing Volvo Bus in Iran. I started working there as computer in design technician and after few months I turned out to be production line quality controller in interior design department. I was working with interior parts used in bus interior and modified several parts to fit to production. I also took courses in The Institute of Standards & Industrial Research of Iran that helped me a lot to modify the parts based on Iran Industrial standards. In late 2008 I had great opportunity to immigrate to the US as a winner of Diversity Immigrant Visa Lottery program called DV program. I came here to bring new life to my family and also continue my education with finest standards. With coming here I had to face lots of difficulties, I had to look for job in the rescission time and It was tough. I started to work in the XXXX Corporation. AMETEK, Inc. is a leading global manufacturer of electronic instruments and electromechanical devices. I started to work as Electronic and Mechanical Assembly of Elgar Ruggedized Uninterruptible Power Supply used in missiles, air planes, spy planes, etc. Also I did quality control of the device and final inspection of Sorenson DC Power Supplies. It was good for me I learned the manufacturing policies and standard in the US. It was surprising to me and also I deeply understand why products ‘Made in USA’ are the first choice of consumers in the world because manufacturers follow strict rules and procedures to meet US standards and ANSI. Unfortunately I lost my job in this company because I had to go to my country for few months and when I came back to the States the XXXX company was not in a good financial situation so I looked for another job. I found a new job with the XXXX Diabetes Care I work. The Tandem’s t:slim™ Insulin Delivery System is the smallest and first ever touch-screen insulin pump. The design is very slim compares with competitors’ device and also is very easy to use and user friendly Working in the company with enormous enthusiastic to technology and consumer like design encouraged me to apply to your great program in the UCXX. I am very fascinated with health care products and always look to find best and new design. I believe that patients in using medical device in their regular life should not feel that they are extra to them vice verse they should feel them as a part of life. Also I noticed this importance of medical devices in patient’s life two years ago when my wife was pregnant and she was diagnosed with gestational diabetes. She had to use the special device several times a day to monitor her blood sugar. I imagined redesigning the product to be more convenient to use and with no pain or bleeding. I went to XXXX Diabetes Care as insulin cartridge assembly and within a month I transferred to engineering department to assemble new bag ironing and “Nipple” welding machines for production line. And now I work with R&D engineers as R&D Technician. I run various tests on insulin cartridges and other Engineering Investigations for new upcoming products. Having a design passion and experiences from my country helped me to grow in the company very soon that it supersized the co-workers. My manager offered me a position as electro mechanical design technician recently but they waiting for company fundraising. Talking with engineers in the company about your elite program they encouraged me to apply to this great program that help me grow in the company and gain tremendous academic knowledge and combine it with my past experiences make it unique. I have the opportunity to use state-of-the-art software design program called “Solid Work” and simulation tools in the work place .My Manager told me Medical Device Engineering is the way to go at UCXX, it enrich your horizon, go straight to the point. I believe that graduate studies would provide me with the opportunities to attend advanced courses and be the stepping stone to my career in designing medical devices. Graduate study at UCXX holds this promise for me. The quality of the faculty, courses conveniently offered Friday/Saturday, the diverse areas of ongoing research, the carefully designed depth and breadth of courses, cultural diversity in the graduate school, seem to me as the right ambience to nurture my interests and work towards my goal. It would be a matter of great pride for me to be a part of this rich interdisciplinary interface program. My strengths are a strong passion to design products and modify them to consumer point of view and follow the standards, sense of teamwork, integrity and ability to put in sustained quality effort consistently. It is my desire to have a mutually beneficial association with your University and to contribute my best to the field of Medical Device Engineering. I am aware that UCXX has high standards for admitting students to its graduate programs and I am more than willing to take some prerequisites if I admitted to the program to gain more knowledge. I believe that my academic credentials together with my work experience and potential would help me gain admission to the esteemed Department of Medical Device Engineering at UCXX. I hope that on reviewing my application package, the University would be convinced of the same. MS Engineering Medical Devices, Iranian
- Masters Physician Assistant Studies Belize
Masters Physician Assistant Studies Belize I look forward to contributing to the diversity of your program as a young woman from Belize. Unlike most people from my country, I am fluent in Spanish as well as English, learning it as a child from my grandmother wI ho did not speak much English. As a Spanish speaking woman of African descent, feel strongly that I have a lot to contribute to the health care of minority groups in America and I keenly look forward to participating in your state-of-the-art program so as to learn how to become the finest Physician Assistant that I can possibly become. In my final year of undergraduate studies at the University of XXXX as a Biomedical Sciences major, I have been particularly blessed since last June of 2012 with the honor of working several hours each week at the XXXX Clinic in Jacksonville. I provide assistance to nurses in the Pain Clinic and thoroughly clean each room after the patient leaves. I have now logged more than 100+ hours of work at XXXX Clinic in the Transport Department of our Pain Clinic and I become extremely happy as soon as I walk through the doors. When my shift is over I find myself not wanting to leave. It is the patients that I love most of all. I particularly enjoy wheeling them down to the waiting area after they have been discharged and delivering morning newspapers, mail, and flowers to designated areas of the hospital. From last August through December (2012), I had the privilege of completing a course through the International Affairs Program at the Washington DC Center for Internship and Academic Studies. As part of my program, I chose to advocate on behalf of The National Network to End Domestic Violence for the reauthorization of the Violence Against Women Act (S.1925) on Capitol Hill. I am also completing a minor in psychology and I am very much engaged with important social issues, particularly those that affect women and children. I am applying to your program because I feel strongly that among the many career options that are available in health care, I am the best fit with the role of Physician Assistant. At this early juncture in my career, I do not yet have concrete plans for my career, but I do know that I have special dreams about attending to the health care needs of the underserved and it would be a special triumph for me at some point in the future to be able to help my people back in Belize. For me, it would be a special honor to serve as a Physician Assistant in an area where the majority of the population falls below the poverty line and/or has a high concentration of elderly residents. I want to serve where the ratio of primary care physician to residents is low and infant mortality rates are high.. From my time spent in D.C. I also learned a lot about rural health, how people in rural areas face a lot of challenges not faced by people in urban areas, particularly with respect to access to healthcare. I am concerned that rural residents are often over looked by legislation and do not get as much help and support as they might need. Most of all, however, I have a special interest in women's health. I have invested a lot of my free time in the study of the many ways in which women are marginalized on a global level, especially when it comes to receiving the healthcare they need, for many different reasons, especially the fact that women, particularly in developing countries, do not have equal access to and control over economic resources. I want to address the weakness of my application to your program. Belize, while better off than some of its close neighbors like Honduras, is still a very poor country. Life was always a difficult economic struggle for me and my family and I was fortunate that my family was able to move to the USA when I was 13. But the struggle to make ends meet continued. When I started college, I was working full time, up to 60 plus hours and traveling a lot for my job so I found myself forced to withdraw from several classes. Over time, I learned how to better manage this very difficult balance between work and study, however, and I have only dropped one class over the course of my last 2 years of study. I will be participating in a research internship program with XXXX Clinic this summer and I am very excited about the prospect of a fuller immersion in full time health care. I am also convinced that this experience will help me to excel in your program from the very beginning. I want to thank you for consideration of my application. Masters Physician Assistant Studies Belize
- MS Industrial Engineering Chinese
MS Industrial Engineering Chinese I am a young woman from China who lives to help people all over the world to become more efficient. I adore technological progress and development and this is why I have devoted my life to helping our global economy to become more streamlined and productive with less waste of valuable resources, so that we can better feed our children, protect our planet, and mitigate human suffering worldwide. There is always a better way ; this Chinese motto accurately expresses the spirit of constant innovation that I feel strongly should characterize the work ethic of all industrial engineers. It has come to define my personal philosophy. I will put it into practice every day through my personal struggle to contribute all that I can to this field. I first learned about operations research while in high school, and was immediately fascinated with what I learned about the importance of efficient decision. Thus, I entered the Industrial Engineering program at Nankai University where I have maintained a consistent path towards advanced study in Operations Research, especially through stochastic process, data mining techniques and feature extraction methods. I appreciate the way that my studies are interdisciplinary and highly relevant to improving the efficiency of industrial systems; taking classes in mechanics, electronics, materials and so forth. I am a good student, which is why I have won three different scholarships. My undergraduate studies have also helped me to develop strong analytical and problem-solving skills. My teachers have encouraged me to apply to graduate school because they feel that I have a lot of creative energy to contribute to our IEOR. The University of Washington is my first choice for graduate study because of the profound respect that I have for the important research taking place at your university. One highlight of my career so far was taking part in an innovation research at Nankai University, serving as the leader of a group of 4, studying the service quality of express mailing in China. We collected questionnaires on the Internet then analyzed 17 indicators of SERVQUAL by using the Kano model. We won third place for the Excellent Paper Award at the 11th China Logistics Academic Annual Conference. For the spring semester of my junior year, I had the privilege of studying at Taiwan’s National Tsinghua University as an exchange student. Most teachers there are US educated and they also encouraged me to apply to graduate school in the US. I was particularly pleased to learn a great deal about the semiconductor industry in Taiwan as well as the successful operation of 7-11 convenience stores throughout the entire island as a result of a highly effective supply chain with punctual, accurate delivery. Another highlight was my two-month internship with Ericsson (China) where I was able to greatly heighten my understanding of agile and lean production and management methods as well as the importance of personalization. At Ericsson, I came to a much fuller understanding of the importance of strategic management for a company's development in a complex business environment. Most recently, I developed a call center simulation for the China Construction Bank, utilizing methodologies such as linear programming, scheduling, and stochastic simulation. Now, I feel that I have the experience and maturity in my field to be able to excel in your highly competitive program. I see your program as one of the finest in the world and keenly look forward to a complete immersion in my studies in a program that stands on the cutting-edge of creative research in our field. I feel that my background and experience is a good fit for your Masters program in Operations Research and Information Engineering, particularly because of my dedication to the study of stochastic process, statistics, modeling and simulation. Thank you for considering my application to your distinguished program. MS Industrial Engineering Chinese
- MACC Masters Accounting Personal Statement
Aspiring Latina professional in accounting collaborates with peers, showcasing leadership and dedication in her MACC journey. I would very much like to enroll in and complete your Online Master’s Program in Accounting to be qualified to assume greater levels of professional responsibility in the business world. As a woman and a Latina, born and raised in an impoverished area of the Bronx, achieving professional success has been a struggle for me. The challenges I have faced due to my background have only fueled my determination to succeed and excel in my chosen field. My journey has not been easy, but it has shaped my character and instilled in me a relentless drive to overcome obstacles. Challenging work has been central to my level of achievement so far, and my diligence, inquisitiveness, and dedication to my work have helped to open doors for me to my professional future. I believe that pursuing a Master's degree in Accounting will not only enhance my skill set but also empower me to take on more significant roles within organizations, ultimately allowing me to contribute positively to the community that has shaped me. XXXX’s program is my first choice to continue my professional preparation due to its convenience and high quality, especially its unique levels of accreditation. The reputation of XXXX’s program as a leader in online education is particularly appealing to me, as it aligns perfectly with my need for flexibility while balancing my professional and personal commitments. I am convinced that my elevated level of motivation and my ethics of dedication to my work make me an excellent candidate for your program. In addition to my undergraduate degree in Administration, which provided me with a solid foundation in business principles, I have also been preparing myself for a career as an accounting professional by assisting with the finances of my local church. This hands-on experience has been invaluable; I prepare a quarterly financial statement, ensuring that members of the church are fully aware of the financial status of our congregation. This role has not only enhanced my accounting skills but also deepened my understanding of financial transparency and accountability, which I believe are crucial in any business environment. Being extremely goal-oriented, I have set my sights on achieving my dreams and ambitions in the field of accounting. My profound dedication to my work and my professional training is the greatest gift that I hope to bring to your program. I also hope to serve as an example to other Latinas that the sky is the limit, and that the business world is as open to us as it is to anyone else. Representation matters, and I aspire to inspire others who may come from similar backgrounds to pursue their aspirations fearlessly. I look forward with keen anticipation to beginning your uniquely excellent program and continuing to prepare myself for greater levels of professional contribution to my family and community. I see Stetson as by far the best route to take towards my goal of earning the CPA Certificate, which I view as a vital credential that will elevate my career and enable me to make meaningful contributions in the field of accounting. I want to thank you for considering me as a candidate for your program, and I am excited about the possibility of joining a community of like-minded individuals who are equally committed to excellence and professional growth. MACC Masters Accounting, Latina Personal Statement
- PHD Chemistry Personal Statement of Purpose Help
Embarking on a Chemistry PhD Journey: Exploring the Essential Tools and Knowledge for Crafting a Compelling Personal Statement of Purpose. I am a 26-year-old man from India who is currently studying towards the MS Degree in Chemistry at the University of ____. I want very much to continue my studies next year at the doctoral level and this is why I am applying to your highly esteemed program. I am particularly interested in doing research in the synthesis of anti-cancer and anti-bacterial compounds. I want to devote my professional life to research in this and related areas because strongly that this is the greatest contribution that I can personally make to society, laboring to better understand the chemical foundations of cancer and, particularly, potential cures for the disease. I am especially interested in doing research into the total synthesis of natural products, developing new reaction methodologies and organ catalysis. Aspiring chemist delves into the molecular world, surrounded by scientific concepts and tools, while crafting a compelling personal statement for a Ph.D. in Chemistry. My inspiration to devote my life to the study of synthetic chemistry resulted from my work in a laboratory during my undergraduate studies in India. One day, we synthesized aspirin as part of our practical course work. Even though aspirin has already been used for centuries as a medicine and was already synthesized in the laboratory over a century ago, I was enormously excited, as if I were the one who was synthesizing it for the first time. I date my profound desire to devote my life to chemistry to this day which will always be so clearly etched in my memory. I have a great deal of research experience with the Indian Institute of Chemical Technology in Hyderabad, India as well as here at the University of ____. I am also experienced at the art of delivering scientific presentations: I served as a member of the faculty at "The Nalgonda College of Arts & Sciences" teaching organic chemistry to B.Sc . students from June of 2007 through July of 2008. I taught: Organic Reaction Mechanisms, Organic Reagents, Stereochemistry, Conformational Analysis, Pericyclic Reactions, Organic Spectroscopy (UV& NMR) and Organic Photochemistry. The accolades that I received from students further strengthened my desire to become a professor. Here at the University of ____, I have been working as a Teaching Assistant for the last 2 years, teaching an Organic Chemistry Laboratory class. I would like to continue to serve in this capacity in a doctoral program. Embarking on the Journey to Advanced Chemistry: A Visual Representation of Aspiration and Academia in Pursuit of a PhD. Growing up in India, I always ranked as the best or second-best student in my class. I was the National Cadet Corps (NCC) best student of the year in 2004, and military officials taught us the value of strict discipline and high professional standards. This helped me to learn to deal with any task at hand, physical or mental, giving my all to my work and pursuing my goals with great commitment and audacity. This resulted in my being awarded a highly competitive research fellowship through the Council of Scientific and Industrial Research (CSIR). Two hundred candidates were selected from among 50,000 students who were chosen to take the examination. When I was preparing for this entrance exam, I didn't even leave my room for several days. Due to a lack of funding, my advisor at UNO stopped my research project after I had worked on it for 14 months and another project failed to advance because I needed a special instrument but, again due to lack of funding, my advisor was not able to make this purchase. Thus, I became understandably disappointed with my progress. As a result, I informed my advisor that I wanted to finish the master's degree and go to another university to study towards my PHD. PHD Chemistry Personal Statement of Purpose
- PHD Materials Science Colombian Personal Purpose
Colombian scientist collaborates internationally on a PhD project in materials science, emphasizing innovation and global cooperation. A 27-year-old man who was raised in Colombia and now lives in America, I will be graduating in May of 2012 with my MS Degree in Physics and want very much to continue to study towards the PHD in an area that will be complimentary to my academic background. I see your program at UC__ as the finest in the world, and I am especially attracted to the beauty and resources of the surrounding area. I am especially interested in doing research in Computational Materials to optimally prepare myself for state-of-the-art research and development in solid state lighting. 10 years from now I would like to be a professor in materials science and engineering while I stay highly active in research. I believe that I would very much enjoy teaching at the university level. This conviction has been reinforced by my work as a tutor in the tutorial center of my university for first- and second-year students in the areas of mathematics, physics, and engineering. I am a persistent person and a hard worker. Embarking on a Materials Science PhD Journey: A Colombian Scientist's Vision to Innovate and Inspire. My fascination and profound respect for multiculturalism have become highly developed not just by the fact that I am from Colombia, but also that I have traveled to many countries, not only in South America, but also Europe and the Middle East. My travels to and studies of other cultures have helped me to develop more nuanced perspectives concerning people and their relationship to their society. I work very well with people from many diverse cultures, religions, and socio-economic backgrounds. I came to the United States 5 years ago as an international student. During my first year of studies, my parents covered the high tuition fees that every international student must pay for their education. Since international students are not allowed to work, my parents also paid for housing, books, and all other expenses related to my studies in the United States. They made many sacrifices for my future, in fact, nearly exhausting their savings. In my second and third years, I was allowed to work on campus for 20 hours a week, and this income helped to at least pay for my housing, books, and miscellaneous expenses. I learned valuable skills throughout this period in terms of personal organization and management and have become both a better person and a better student for having met the challenge of working while studying full time. A Colombian PhD candidate in Materials Science sits amidst symbolic elements representing personal and academic pursuit, with a focus on innovation and progress. After completing the PHD, I hope to gain additional experience in my field and I want to always stay involved with science in such a way that I remain engaged with South America, especially with the many challenges that it faces in terms of economic development. I hope to spend many decades in the forefront of developments in materials handling that meet the challenge of new generations of technological endeavors and hurdles that will need to be overcome in South America. I am extremely impressed by the research going on in materials at UCXX and I want to thank you for considering my application to your renowned program. PHD Materials Science Personal Purpose
- PHD Chemistry Fuel Cells Personal Statement of Purpose
A scientist passionately delves into fuel cell chemistry, surrounded by molecular diagrams, as an attentive student eagerly listens and takes notes in the lab. I have maintained a decade of conceptual continuity in my academic and professional careers. Progressing logically and naturally into increasingly challenging research, I have been left more eager to conduct my Ph.D. work. The timing could not be better either, allowing me to grow within my current position with ____ Labs. More specifically, conducting research into the areas of high-energy batteries, I will be improving not only myself personally and professionally, but also aiding ____ Labs maintain their industrial status as one of the finest bioanalytical and immunoanalytical labs in the world. Being proactive, taking the initiative, confidently leading and motivating the people around me through established positive working culture, I have enjoyed enormous success, bolstering my self-efficacy and confidence for my next career move: further development and education. By completing my Ph.D., I will also be paving my path to my two ultimate goals and ambitions, my dreams, namely, becoming a university research professor and owning and or operating a pharmaceutical company. Overall, my purpose is simply, as it has always been, to work in research that will aid in making the society we live and work in that much better, helping to enhance lives everywhere through practical, sustainable solutions to the problems we face every day. We all have a conscious responsibility to create the kind of world we want to live in. By establishing a profitable company, we have a social responsibility to help others, hire the right people with the right education and experiences, and help them achieve their potential. Aspiring chemist drafts a transformative personal statement surrounded by beakers and scientific imagery, symbolic of innovation in fuel cell research. For the future, I envision returning to the classroom, this time as a professor and researcher attached to a university with many opportunities for ongoing research, research that I can expose my students to. It would be an excellent opportunity to expose students to relevant, current research with real-world applications. I envision contributing to the further development of ways to gather invaluable information and handle large-scale data. Given my educational and research experiences thus far, I aspire to become an effective and creative professor, indeed. Given my experience at ____ labs, utilizing advanced mass spectrometry, immunoanalytical support, pharmacokinetics and pharmacodynamics, I will be able to bring the latest industrial processes such as preclinical and clinical development program knowledge to my own pharma company. I have an excellent background, an overview of pharma companies, in addition to my two years with ____, I have a total of six months experience conducting both quality control and senior lab associate work for two major pharma research companies. I also have an elevated level of cultural competency, which will work well for me in the classroom with many international students. I look forward to relishing the diversity. Having been born and raised in Vietnam, and fully fluent in two languages, I have a unique worldview which lends itself to communicating effectively with people of differing backgrounds. I feel that this will aid me tremendously as I work with diverse students, professors, and researchers. In the most practical terms, as a part of my regular duties with ____, I have acted as a trainer for all new chemists in the use of ____ an extension of my previous experiences with ____ Analytical in which I trained new chemists in the use of ____ Dissolution, and pH meter to analyze small molecules. I bring with me to the research program a strong academic foundation, and have excelled, maintaining a near-perfect GPA throughout my MS program at __U. While completing my graduate research project, I was awarded a contract with the US Army to conduct further research into high-energy batteries. The intensity of the program is not in question, to my mind, I am completely prepared for and expect an intense learning environment. I find the rigors of your competitive program exhilarating, even ideal. An aspiring chemist explores the promising realm of fuel cells, combining scientific knowledge and research to pursue a PhD focused on advancing clean energy solutions. My cultural competency, a skill I have developed from having been immersed in the cultures of two countries, educated in Vietnam and the US, and traveling around America, has gifted me with a well-rounded worldview. My solid academic foundation in the sciences, as well as professional research exposure, speaks to my ability to apply scientific analysis to classroom situations and to learn a great deal from my peers as well as my teachers. With my innovative record of accomplishment leading projects autonomously from concept to fruition, I bring with me practical experience and exposure in the field, and numerous sets of lessons learned through doing in the real world. ____ University is my sole choice for further education and the ideal learning and research environment. In the most practical sense, I have built a rapport with the Chemistry department and thus far developed a pleasant personal and professional niche. The work of Dr. ____ ____ into fuel cells and batteries, specifically high discharge rate alkaline batteries, will aid my own research enormously. No other professor could offer me a more relevant or fulfilling leadership and teaching experience. I recognize that there is always room for improvement and aim to fill in the formal gaps in my existing set of skills and knowledge, achieving professional satisfaction in the field that will continue to bring me the greatest sense of accomplishment. I look forward to an extended relationship with ____ University with great eagerness. Thank you for your time and consideration. PHD Chemistry Fuel Cells Personal Statement of Purpose Help
- EMBA International Business Program Personal Statement
Exploring Global Opportunities: An Artistic Depiction of Aspiring Business Leaders Engaged in Learning, Bridging Knowledge and Innovation in an Ever-Connected World. I am a good match for your EMBA program at ____ University because of how my interests are mirrored by the dedication of your program to the development of students' ability to apply integrative knowledge and personal skills to genuine business problems, especially on an international level. As the current Internal Sales Manager for all North America for a European-based company called ____, I have increasingly become fascinated by the challenges of doing business across borders, the international aspect of business that I find highly intriguing, and attractive. But I need your program at ____ to help me understand the theoretical aspects of the pragmatic realities of the challenges facing international corporations. You can provide me with the intellectual tools I need to become the best I can be as an international manager. Embarking on a Global Journey: The Path to an MBA in International Business. Looking forward to someday becoming the CEO of a corporation that does business throughout much of the world, I have much to learn in your program. For a fraternity boy, I am especially exceptional lying dedicated to school, serious, and, most importantly, compassionate for those less fortunate in life, the poor, and those who have their roads to advancement blocked by unjust economic and political structures. I see myself increasingly as not only an American, but a world citizen. I especially look forward to an in-depth study of corporate social responsibility. As president of my fraternity (Kappa Alpha), I organized, zed all our philanthropical activities, and raised a lot of money for various charitable organizations. I am a kind man who longs to do business with warmth, friendship, honesty, and especially. I do not want the power to be able to exercise it. I want it to be able to help people. Crafting a Vision for Global Success: An MBA Journey in International Business. My central convictions, principles, and goals in life include advocacy and the proposition that conducting business in a socially responsible way is the most profitable way to run a corporation, especially over the long term. I am mature at 25 and have finely refined corporate management skills with an international company. I look forward to becoming an asset to your program at __U because of my profound sincerity, curiosity, and intense drive to make the world a better place to live for all of us through economic development led by the private sector. I am a cosmopolitan man, well read, and well-traveled, having seen most of Europe since my company is based in Copenhagen. Thus, I look forward with keen anticipation to sharing experiences and strategies with my teachers and peers from around the world, working together to make our global village a kinder, softer, and more comfortable place to live for people of all nations: through increased efficiency of international corporate management and respect for the need for social responsibility. Thank you for considering my application. EMBA International Business Program Personal Statement of Purpose
- Indian EMBA Biomedical Personal Statement
EMBA Biomedical Personal Statement My long-term goal is to establish myself as an independent researcher, specifically focusing on the fields of biochemistry and biochemical research, leading to the creation of my own specialized business in this dynamic and impactful area. I have dedicated years to honing my skills and gaining valuable experience, which has allowed me to distinguish myself as a capable and knowledgeable physical scientist. My journey thus far has equipped me with a solid foundation in scientific methodologies, laboratory techniques, and analytical thinking, all of which are essential for conducting high-quality research. To fully realize my aspirations, I need to develop additional competencies that complement my scientific expertise. This realization has led me to seek further education and training in business, particularly through the Graduate School of Business (GSB). I am particularly interested in delving into subjects such as marketing and finance, as these areas are critical for the successful launch and sustainability of a research-oriented business. Understanding marketing strategies will enable me to effectively communicate my research findings and innovations to a broader audience, while a solid grasp of finance will be essential for managing resources, budgeting, and securing funding for my projects. In addition to these practical business skills, I am also eager to explore the concepts of social responsibility and progressive political agendas within the business landscape. I believe that as a researcher and entrepreneur, I have a responsibility to contribute positively to society and to consider the ethical implications of my work. By studying these subjects, I hope to integrate socially responsible practices into my business model, ensuring that my research not only advances scientific knowledge but also aligns with the values of sustainability and community engagement. Furthermore, I envision my independent research business as a hub for innovation, collaboration, and education. I aim to create an environment where interdisciplinary approaches can thrive, bringing together scientists, students, and industry professionals to address pressing challenges in biochemistry. This collaborative spirit will not only enhance the quality of the research conducted but also foster a culture of continuous learning and growth. I want to help bridge the gap between scientific research and practical application, making significant contributions to the field of biochemistry while also championing ethical business practices. I am excited about the journey ahead and look forward to the opportunities that studying at the GSB will provide, allowing me to develop the skills and knowledge necessary to achieve my vision of becoming a leading independent researcher and successful entrepreneur in the biochemistry domain. EMBA Biomedical Personal Statement Samples I completed my undergraduate and master's level studies in my native India. Then I came to XXXX University, where I earned my Ph.D. in Chemistry in December of 2005. Of course, this is the most substantial aspect of my application because of the utility of this terminal scientific degree for the business world, staying abreast of the business aspects of scientific developments in chemistry and microbiology. I am also happy to have received the Doctoral Dissertation Completion Award in March 2005, based on evaluations by an interdepartmental committee of faculty members. EMBA Biomedical Personal Statement of Purpose I have authored two research papers from my doctoral dissertation in 2006 that were published in the journal Biochemistry. I am the first author of both articles. Currently, I have the privilege of serving as a post-doctoral research associate in the Hematology/Oncology Division of the Department of Medicine at the University of Chicago. I am also pursuing research on Acute Lymphoblastic Leukemia (ALL) and expect to receive funding from a private agency by next year. Two manuscripts from my postdoctoral work are in the pipeline. I will be the first author for one of the two papers. I am diligent and intelligent, with a sound educational background and a GPA of 3.82. I am tenacious and capable of a career that offers great challenges. I feel strongly. Indian EMBA Biomedical Personal Statement for Business Success
- MS Agricultural Economics Personal Purpose
Crafting a Successful Statement of Purpose in Agricultural Economics I was born to the study of international markets since my father worked as a trader in heavy industry for almost 30 years and did business in 10+ countries including the Middle East, India, Singapore, China, the U.S., and several European countries. Thus, in addition to learning a great deal about international commerce, I was also exposed to a broad variety of cultures and languages growing up, all of which fostered in me a sense of identity as a global citizen advocating for planetary ethics. On my first trip to India, for example, I saw hundreds of homeless people laying down in the street begging for coins. Horrified and curious, I began paying special attention to food issues, learning why an agricultural giant like India was not even close to achieving food security for its people. I left my native Korea to study abroad as an adolescent. First, I went to England all alone at the age of thirteen to study English intensively for 3 months. Courageous and a huge fan of Harry Potter, I thought England was the place to be. After a brief time at home, I went to Canada as an exchange student for a year and then on to Seattle for three years where I completed high school and excelled at gymnastics. Next, I went to the University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign for four years where I studied Broadcast Journalism, thinking of becoming a film and TV producer. Soon, however, I switched my major to Agriculture and immersed myself in in-depth study, particularly as concerns farm machinery. My father, who has always been my foremost role model, with his background in heavy industry, fully supported my decision to focus on food. As a student of farming, I profited from the experience of spending 4 years in the “Corn Belt” (Illinois, Iowa, Wisconsin, Indiana, and Ohio). I quickly realized that I was located at the center of the world’s breadbasket and have studied intensively the way in which production of the most basic staples, corn and wheat in particular, are heavily concentrated in only a few countries, especially the US, Brazil, Russia and China – all of which are major exporters of basic grains. My undergraduate studies have sparked a lifetime dedication to the study of agricultural economics because of the great passion that I find aroused in me by these, and other burning issues of the day related to global food supplies. In my senior year in college, I enrolled in the course titled “Commodity Futures and Options,” which provided me with an in-depth understanding of the intricate mechanisms involved in the trading of agricultural commodities. Throughout the semester, I delved into the complexities of how crops are not only traded between various companies but also exchanged on an international scale. This experience opened my eyes to the multifaceted nature of the agricultural market, where factors such as weather patterns, geopolitical tensions, and economic policies can significantly influence prices and availability. One of the most compelling aspects of this course was the exploration of the delicate balance between economic development and food security. I found myself increasingly intrigued by the pressing questions that arise at this intersection. For instance, how can nations develop economically while ensuring that their populations have reliable access to sufficient and nutritious food? This inquiry is particularly pertinent in a world where the demands of a growing population are constantly at odds with the challenges posed by climate change, resource depletion, and socio-political instability. As I pondered these questions, I realized that my passion for understanding these dynamics has driven my desire to pursue graduate studies in international economics and policy. I am eager to immerse myself in an academic environment that not only fosters critical thinking but also encourages the exploration of innovative solutions to pressing global issues. My goal is to gain a comprehensive understanding of the global economic landscape, particularly as it pertains to land use efficiency and food security. My ambition is to equip myself with the knowledge and skills necessary to contribute meaningfully to discussions and policy-making processes related to food security and economic development. I envision a future where I can advocate for policies that promote equitable access to food while supporting sustainable agricultural practices. By pursuing graduate studies, I aim to be at the forefront of efforts to bridge the gap between economic growth and food security, ensuring that both can coexist harmoniously in our increasingly interconnected world. I could not be more pleased that my efforts were rewarded this year by my being awarded a student travel grant to attend and present my research at an international conference. Thank you for considering my application to ____ University. MS Agricultural Economics Personal Purpose Statement Examples














