GraduateSchoolPersonalStatement.com
by Dr. Robert Edinger
Helping Applicants Since 2005 
drrobertedinger@gmail.com

To write a compelling Diversity Statement for graduate school, focus on authentic storytelling, alignment with institutional values, and concrete examples of your impact. Here’s a structured guide to help you craft a powerful and personalized Diversity Statement:

 

🧭 Understand Its Purpose

• Show your commitment to diversity, equity, and inclusion (DEI) in academic and professional settings.

• Demonstrate how your background, experiences, or goals contribute to a more inclusive graduate community.

• Highlight your potential to enhance the institution’s DEI mission, not just your identity.

✍️ Writing Strategies

1. Define Diversity for Yourself

• Reflect on what diversity means in your field and life.

• Consider dimensions like race, ethnicity, gender, socioeconomic status, disability, language, religion, geography, and more.

2. Tell a Story

• Use a narrative approach to describe formative experiences.

• Share how these shaped your values, perspective, or actions related to inclusion.

3. Show Impact

• Describe specific actions you’ve taken:

  • Mentoring underrepresented students

  • Volunteering in diverse communities

  • Advocating for inclusive policies or curricula

• Explain outcomes or lessons learned.

4. Connect to Your Field

• Explain how your research, teaching, or service will promote diversity.

• Mention plans to work with underserved populations or integrate inclusive methodologies.

5. Align with the Institution

• Research the school’s diversity mission and programs.

• Show how your values and goals complement theirs.

🛠️ Final Tips

• Keep it concise: Usually 1–2 pages.

• Avoid jargon: Use clear, accessible language.

• Proofread carefully: Ask mentors or peers for feedback.

• Balance humility and confidence: Show your contributions without overstating.