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Information Science and Data Systems Personal Statement and Statement of Purpose for Graduate School
Sample 1st Paragraph of the Personal Statement for Graduate School in Information and Data
Born in Liberia and raised mostly in Ghana, I have been in the USA for the past six years. Now twenty-seven and ready for graduate school, I want to put my foremost passion to work in database design and web application development. The master's of science in computer information systems program at XXXX University is my first choice among graduate programs because of its sheer excellence, coupled to the honor and sheer joy of studying on the most diverse campus in America.
A cosmopolitan young woman from India, I am the best fit for your MIS Master's Program at the University of XXXX for a variety of reasons, especially the flagship nature of your program and the diversity of your student body. Since I have already earned an MBA with a special emphasis in Human Resources, I am confident that I will be able to excel at UXX. Human Resources and Management Information Systems are two functional areas of business that have had a significant impact on businesses and organizations, especially in the last two decades. Not only do they get to the core of the business, but they also impact all areas. As an MBA- HR professional, I want to utilize applied IT in management practices. Overall, I want to make a difference – not just get a job but create jobs. And I believe this blend of personnel skills and technical expertise will get me there.
Your highly esteemed program is my first choice for graduate study because of my profound respect for the research being done at your distinguished institution in the areas of databases, data Mining, and machine learning, as well as security, privacy, and cryptography. I have identified these interests as central to the contribution that I would like to make to Saudi Arabia and the world. In this way, I will be able to contribute to making our planet a safer place to do business and to share information, especially with respect to commerce and administration in the KSA.