GraduateSchoolPersonalStatement.com
by Dr. Robert Edinger
Helping Applicants Since 2005 
drrobertedinger@gmail.com

I finished my master's degree in Religious Studies at Indiana University in 1988 and my PHD in Religion was granted by the University of Southern California in 1995. I have spent my life studying religion and now I am an old man who helps others to achieve the profound satisfaction that I have found in life. While I help people to get accepted to graduate school in all areas, Religious Studies will always be special for me since it is the field of my own studies. I am quite familiar with world cultures and world religions, and I often do research on behalf of my clients to help them make their Statement as effective as possible.

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I hope to be accepted to your distinguished master's degree Program in Religion at XXXX University because I see your program as the best fit for my interests, spanning three distinct areas of inquiry: Religion, Sociology, and Social Work. I have received a scholarship from the Indian government for my Master’s Studies in the United States because I am a competitive candidate for a professional lifetime devoted to research into the nature, patterns, and forms of progressive social change in my country, India. I plan to earn a Master’s Degree that is focused on ways that we can go about building a more just and equitable society in India as elsewhere, eventually being able to recognize the basic human rights of dispossessed and destitute populations and provide them with the  basic amenities required by human dignity.