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- Masters Criminology, Black Football Player
Masters Criminology, Black Football Player While I graduated from XXXX University in May of 2013 with my undergraduate degree in Criminology, I received a full athletic scholarship for 4 years and continued to play football through December of 2013. Winning the Big 12 Conference’s Player of the Week Award for XXU’s NCAA Division 1 Football Team in September of 2013 was an especially sweet, crowning achievement. I was not, however, drafted by the NFL. Thus, football is over for me since I have no interest in a professional career in sports except as an athlete. Now, therefore, I want to score points with my mind rather than my body and I am equally determined to succeed and excel. A young African-American man, my father is a minister and he has been very influential in my life as a role model, particularly his deep commitment to our community. He has always struggled to instill in me a profound appreciation for moral and ethical values and the importance of making a contribution to our society, especially our fellow African-Americans. This is the primary reason why I was inspired to complete my undergraduate studies in Criminology, with a minor in American Ethics, to prepare myself to contribute to the achievement of greater levels of social justice in America of tomorrow, especially for African-Americans whose presence in the criminal justice system has always been grossly disproportionate, ever since they were first freed from slavery and began to be incarcerated in large numbers (rather than lynched—especially in the south, where I am from). This is not to say that I have excelled as a student of either history or social issues. Frankly, my college years were very much dominated by excelling as a football player and my grades suffered. Still, I never lost my idealistic sense of wanting to make a contribution as a social activist, organizer, and/or administrator in the future in an area where I can work to enhance social justice, particularly for young people from ethnic minority communities being processed by the criminal justice system. I want to struggle to keep young black people, especially boys, to stay out of the justice system to begin with, and once there, to do all that I can to assure that the treatment they receive is just and fair. I hope to support myself and the family that I anticipate having someday and to be a good father myself; and to serve as a good role model, especially for African-American boys who tend to look up to football players. Since this past August, 2014, I have been working for my local government, serving as a District Coordinator for the City of XXXX Texas. While I am responsible for core business operations within my defined geographical (North Gate) district, most of my efforts and energy are devoted to ensuring traffic safety on a day-by-day basis, which gives me the opportunity to interact with many members of my community, which I very much enjoy. I thought about pursuing an MPA Degree rather than a Master’s in Criminology but I have made my final decision that XXXU’s Online Program in Criminology is the right choice for graduate school. I remain an idealist who wants to become an advocate for social justice on some level at some point in my career, and I see advanced study in criminology as the best choice to prepare myself for my maximum, long term contribution to my society, particularly the African-American community. Each year more young black men enter our criminal justice system than enroll in our institutions of higher education system. I want to prepare myself to work to change this. I am very happy in my job serving my community since I love working in security, laboring each day to prevent traffic accidents. I will be able to continue with my present employment at the same time that I continue my education at SHSU, thus pursing my long-term dreams at night and on weekends while I continue to serve my community full time. I thank you for considering my application to your distinguished program at XXXU. Masters Criminology, Black Football Player
- Internship Health Care Administration Latino
Internship Health Care Administration Latino I already hold a good degree in general Business Management and am currently pursuing an MBA in Health Care Administration. As you will note, my career to date has been spent in the area of Neurodiagnostic Technology. However because of my successful work in that area, I have for some time been involved in exercising various management and leadership functions. My wish now is to combine my fairly long experience of patient care together with my proven organizational and administrative skills and academic background and potential to become a leader in the field of Healthcare Administration. Healthcare became particularly important to me from the early age of 13 when my mother was diagnosed with breast cancer which subsequently mestasized to her brain. She was a patient for six years until her death and during that time, naturally, I was acutely interested in the quality of care that she received and found that, on some occasions, this was disappointing. This experience clearly demonstrated to me the importance of separating the patient from the person and in the value of staff having the time and inclination to share a joke and squeeze a hand when appropriate. I also learned the value of staff relating well to close relatives and empathizing with them in times of distress and discouragement and in joining in the elation when things are going well. My experience in my work to date, has confirmed to me the very close relationship between excellent health administration and excellence of care provided to patients and it is my aim to further the quality of both as far as it is in my power. In ten years from now I would hope to hold a senior executive role in health administration. I would see my role primarily as providing a platform to enable and encourage healthcare providers of all specialties and grades to perform their roles at their optimum effectiveness for the benefit of patients. I see the removal of any administrative obstacles in the way of patient care as being a basic matter and one that should also be subject to constant monitoring and action as appropriate. I would seek to minimize the administrative demands on clinicians whilst simultaneously enabling them to have easy access to relevant, accurate, reliable, fully updated patient, statistical and other necessary information. As you will see from my CV, I have been closely involved in the areas of credentialing and accreditation and have acquired substantial experience in these areas that will be transferable to a senior management role in healthcare administration. This voluntary activity is a measure of my interest in training and in measuring the effectiveness of training provided. I am aware that leadership skill forms a very important component in the roles for which I hope to become qualified. I have always encouraged junior colleagues to recognize that their potential may be much greater than they themselves recognise and to seek to recognise and to realize that potential as I have always sought to do in my own life. I also have substantial experience of working as an effective team member in a multi-disciplinary environment and as a senior office-holder in various professional bodies. My academic record will provide assurance of my potential to excel within the program. I completed my undergraduate degree, and am completing my MBA, while working full time and also serving as a senior officer of my professional body’s Accreditation Board (ABRET). This reflects highly developed time management skills and work ethic and a deep commitment to the field of healthcare. I would be interested in undertaking a research project relating to the credentialing and licensing as it relates to healthcare professionals because of my experience in this area. I am also interested in how the method of presentation of information in a healthcare context might affect the way in which it is perceived and subsequently acted upon by the recipient. I regard the program as being the ‘perfect fit’ to enable me to achieve my professional goals and to fit me to make a significant contribution to advances in this vital area of healthcare. I am convinced that my atypical, but nevertheless relevant, background will enable me to bring fresh and useful insights to the program and I look forward to receiving the benefit of those that my colleagues will provide. I promise an enthusiastic and highly diligent involvement in the program in which I feel that I have the genuine and proven potential to excel. Internship Health Care Administration Latino
- LOR Graduate Application Social Work #1
LOR Graduate Application Social Work #1 Date Dear Sir/Madam This recommendation letter is in reference to Mr. XXXX who has worked with me for three years under my direct supervision at the Ethiopian Women Lawyers Association (EWLA). XXXX has excellent communication and negotiation skills combined with a great capacity for organizing, managing and conducting a range of training programs for diverse target groups including adults, young people, members of minority and marginalized groups such as disabled people and survivors of domestic violence. During his time with us, he has prepared comprehensive training plans, organized and delivered training sessions, and worked hard to ensure that best practices are used in all training activities. In addition, under my direct supervision, he has adapted materials for various training sessions that include the creation of training manuals and curricula. He has made numerous presentations for reflection and policy discussions pertaining to issues of human and women’s rights advocacy. I can attest to XXXX’s high level of writing ability concerning social issues and concerns along with his strong commitment to delivering quality output and meeting deadlines. XXXX is able to deftly manage multiple, complex situations at a time and perform optimally even under difficult circumstances. I believe that it is his optimistic personality that has led him to engage in humanitarian activities and advocacy for underprivileged groups. He also has the ability to work with diverse cultural and religious groups. XXXX is very diligent at meeting deadlines and is attentive to detail, always paying close attention to directions from his supervisors. It is a pleasure to work with XXXX. His positive attitude, sharp mind, and innovative ability enables him to think holistically and venture out of the comfort zone. He is a great team worker, always going out of his way to assist other team members to achieve their own objectives. During his time with us, he has demonstrated a high level of leadership ability, motivating his colleagues and staff to also excel. He is very innovative in his action and has good analytical skills. XXXX has a most pleasant personality and I have learned a lot from working with him. I have no doubt that XXXX is ready for bigger challenges and I feel strongly that he would be a great asset to a graduate program in social work at your esteemed University. Kind Regards, LOR Graduate Application Social Work #1
- MA Translation, UK, Saudi Woman
MA Translation, UK, Saudi Woman Still only 24, I am a mature and hard working young woman from Jeddah, Saudi Arabia on the coast of the Red sea. Jeddah is one of the most international cities in the Middle East and the most international and liberal of Saudi cities, where foreigners feel most comfortable. I completed my undergraduate studies in translation because I developed a passion early on for multilingual and multicultural communication. I am currently serving as a Teaching Assistant in the area of English Language at the King Saud Bin Abdulaziz University for Health Sciences College of Medicine, in Jeddah, a position which includes full scholarships for study towards the MA and PHD Degrees. ____ University is my first choice for Masters Studies because I feel strongly that your program is the best fit for someone with my linguistic assets. I hope to learn everything that I can about translation and put it to good use it the perfection of my own linguistic skills. I am approaching an intermediate level in Japanese conversation and making rapid progress as a beginner in German. I look forward to contributing the diversity of your program not only as a Saudi Arabian woman, but also as someone of Egyptian and Persian ancestry who also reads Farsi. I feel strongly that translation has a lot to contribute to improving relations between countries and cultures through better understanding of mutual interests and shared goals. Saudi Arabia and Iran are a good example of two very different countries, cultures, and religions that experience a great deal of tension and competition. This is one of the reasons why I hope to devote many years to the perfection of Arabic/Farsi as well as Arabic/English translation. In Jeddah, although it is our city with the greatest diversity, at the present time, almost all of our available translation services are limited to English/Arabic/French. There is only a handful that include German and my searches have yielded little to no results for Farsi. I look forward to many decades of hard work as a professional Saudi Arabian translator, labouring to improve communication channels and avoid misunderstandings between people of my own nationality and mother tongue, on the one hand, and the rest of the world—to the extent to which I am able—on the other. I hope to contribute to movements for Middle East integration in the future and in this way hopefully contribute to the creation of greater levels of peace and stability in the region. I want to promote Thus, enabling an in-depth integration into the "Other's" culture, that will hopefully clarify differences, wash out misconceptions, and promote acceptance, mutual understanding, and better respect for the worldly need for and methods to peace. My long term goal is to launch and develop my own corporation dedicated to translation service is Jeddah. I anticipate that our central area of concern would be in the translation of legal contracts on an international level. I look forward to taking full advantage of the international spirit of my city. Jeddah serves as the gate (seaport /airport) to the two most important holy cities for people of one of the world’s fastest growing, major religions, Islam. Perhaps most importantly is the fact that most members of this religion do everything within the power to come to Saudi Arabia’s holy sites on pilgrimage, at least once in their lifetime. In this way my country serves as a communication gateway not only with the rest of the Middle East, but with large, far flung Muslim populations, Indonesia being an especially notable example. Virtually all worldwide commerce for the entire KSA passes through Jeddah; as a result, it is extremely fertile in commerce. Its population is formed of a wide variety of ethnicities and cultures and there is great need for novel and creative initiatives in the area of translation services. The company that I hope to eventually build would take full advantage of the cultural diversity of our city. I also hope to build a translation institute that would include language classes with an emphasis on culture. I hope to open doors for new generations of dreamers. I feel a deep-seated desire to make positive contributions to my society in a way that helps us to better integrate with the rest of the world. Generally speaking, I see commerce and trade and the great peacemakers in a conflictive world. And I also see translation education, research, and services as central to the achievement of sustainable development and full integration into the global economy. A passionate believer in equality, especially between men and women, I hope to serve as a role model for new generations of Saudi women who are thinking about entering careers and build their own businesses as well as participating at the highest levels in our academic communities. I look forward to facing many challenges in building my own translation services company; everything from finding the necessary funding to building the appropriate team. I enjoy the planning stages very much, reflecting upon the importance of building a well-know and trusted identity. I have long admired institutions of higher learning in the UK and I see you program at XXXX University as the optimal spring board for me to reach the pinnacles of success in the area of translation services based in Jeddah, Saudi Arabia. I thank you for consideration of my application to your distinguished program. MA Translation, UK, Saudi Woman
- Masters Electrical Engineering, Chinese Applicant
Masters Electrical Engineering, Chinese Applicant The gorgeous light as well as the beautiful melody deeply fascinated me. The electronic building block seemed to have a magic power to me when I was a small child. I remember spending hours pouring over the little blueprints that came with my toy and then constructing different circuits. That may have been my first experience of engineering and it has been engraved in my mind ever since. I have always had an interest in the way things work and science has always been one of my favorite subjects. My intense passion for the sciences, particularly physics and mathematics, has increased exponentially as I have advanced in school and I particularly enjoy the challenge of using science and mathematics to solve everyday problems. I earned a score in the top 1% on the Chinese National University Entrance Examination and began my studies in environmental engineering. Soon, however, I realized that my true calling as an engineer was in the area of optical information science and technology. For me, this area represents a perfect combination of theory in physics and mathematics with the most exciting of practical applications. So, I transferred to this major for the balance of my studies. My grades steadily increased along with my passion for my studies and I finished with a GPA of 3.7 To enhance my research skills and better prepare myself for graduate school, I have been working as a research assistant since last year in the State Key Laboratory of Optoelectronic Materials and Technologies. We are studying minimal spatial scale light fields, their interaction with microstructure as well as their applications for super-resolution imaging. Our research project is part of the China’s State Key Program for Basic Research. We have made particularly exceptional progress in the generation, manipulation, and focusing properties of cylindrical vector beams.We constructed an experimental setup based on the use of the near field scanning optical microscope (NSOM) in order to better study the focusing properties of radically and azimuthally polarized beams under high NA objective lens. We measured the focal spot size using the knife edge method. We were highly successful in our observations of a focal spot of the radically polarized beams, including their spatial size breaks and diffraction resolution limits. We were also able to confirm the donut shape of the electric field of a tightly focused azimuthally polarized beam. At the same time, we also constructed an experiment setup in the far field. This setup is aimed at generating arbitrary vector beams with a spatial light modulator (SLM). Unfortunately, we have several problems with the setup which limit its value for further research and application. Although we solved some of the problems, the remaining ones, related to the complicated setup design and limitations of experimental conditions, still made the scheme infeasible. Currently, I am independently engaged in the construction of a new experimental setup under the teacher’s guidance. We are hopeful that the new experimental setup will overcome the shortcomings of the previous one. In addition to my academic studies, I have long been involved in various extracurricular activities. I was one of the First Violins with the Sun Yat-sen University Symphony Orchestra and performed on numerous occasions. I was especially proud that we won the championship during the Students’ Association of SYSU Finals. I was privileged to develop my teamwork and leadership skills in my service as group leader, synthesizing sounds from different directions into a harmoniously whole. I am a kind young man who cares about my society and country. I have participated in China General Social Survey (CGSS), conducting a survey of 100 families about their living conditions. Also, I surveyed the living conditions of the “left-behind” children (children who are left behind in their hometown in rural areas while their parents go to urban areas to work) in my hometown. These experiences have helped me to mature and they have also improved my communication skills and leadership abilities. I feel confident that I will be able to excel in your program as a result of my coursework at Sun Yat-sen University, my research experience at the State Key Laboratory of Optoelectronic Materials and Technologies, and the personal qualities developed through my extracurricular activities. I am most eager to continue my education and improve upon my weaknesses. I long to become highly familiar with the cutting edge of developments in my field, especially optics on nanometer scale, light-matter interaction, and biophotonics. Ideally, I would like to enter into a Master's program that would lead me into Ph. D. studies later on. My long term goal is to do research in academia or industry and to enjoy the stimulation that this career offers. Masters Electrical Engineering, Chinese Applicant
- MS Education Learning and Development Latina
A jubilant graduate celebrates her achievement in MS Education Learning and Development, capturing a moment of triumph and joy in front of a grand academic building. My entire professional journey, which has spanned nearly a decade, has been dedicated to the field of training and development, and I can genuinely say that I have relished (almost) every single day of this rewarding career. The core of a trainer's role revolves around the effective and efficient transmission of information, knowledge, and skills to employees, ultimately serving the overarching goals of the company. However, it is equally important to recognize that the needs of the employer are well complemented by empowering employees to realize that their personal potential may far exceed their initial assumptions. By providing encouragement and assistance, I aim to help them unlock this potential within the organization. My goal is to achieve a harmonious balance between these two objectives, ensuring both organizational success and individual growth. My parents, who immigrated to the United States from El Salvador, faced significant challenges that shaped my perspective on education and opportunity. Their own university education was abruptly interrupted due to the civil war that engulfed their homeland, leading them to seek refuge and a better life in the United States. In their new environment, they took on 'blue collar' jobs to provide for me and my siblings, yet their unwavering reverence for education profoundly influenced our upbringing. They instilled in us the value of learning and the importance of pursuing knowledge. Even now, they actively participate in locally funded adult education classes, where I have had the privilege of volunteering as an educator, specifically teaching the fundamentals of English as a second language. The determination, diligence, and optimism exhibited by adult students—many of whom have faced numerous obstacles and challenges in their lives—serve as both an inspiration and a source of joy for me. It has always been my intention to 'make a difference' in the lives of others, rather than merely to 'make a living' for myself. Witnessing the positive effects of the training programs I have designed and delivered, and the impact they have had on adult learners and their career aspirations, has provided me with immense satisfaction. I firmly believe that in the realm of education, it is truly 'never too late' to learn, and I strive to instill that belief in my students. Graduate beaming with pride as she celebrates earning her Master of Education in Learning and Development. I derive great satisfaction from successfully engaging hesitant or unenthusiastic employees, transforming them into active and enthusiastic participants in training programs. There is nothing more rewarding than hearing an employee express that they have learned something directly applicable to their work and, importantly, that they had fun while doing so. I also advocate for employers to encourage, and where possible, assist employees in pursuing interests that may not have any immediate vocational application. This approach can cultivate a broader appetite for learning and development across all areas of life, ultimately enhancing the general well-being of employees, which is a tangible benefit to employers as well. As you will see from my resume, my extensive experience in Learning & Development has been cultivated across a diverse array of industries and training settings. This breadth of experience has involved the application of a wide variety of materials and techniques tailored to meet the specific needs of different organizations. The targeted projects I have been involved in have consistently led to highly successful outcomes for both the companies and the employees involved. My ability to adapt to various environments and to customize training solutions has been a cornerstone of my professional development. Looking ahead, my ultimate ambition is to attain a leadership role within the training and development field. I aspire to lead a team of instructional designers and to mentor those who are new to this area of work. My academic background, combined with my extensive experience in training across a multitude of settings, alongside my genuine passion for the field, will undoubtedly enable me to 'add value' to any program I am part of. I am eager to share the highly relevant insights and experiences that my background has provided, fostering an environment of growth and innovation within my team and the broader organization.
- MA International Affairs UK Nigerian Woman
Celebrating Success: A Nigerian graduate joyfully throws her cap in the air, marking her achievement of an MSc in International Affairs at a prestigious UK university. Raised partially in the UK, I am a young Nigerian woman who communicates exceptionally well in English on international levels as well as in Africa. I have studied in France as well and I continue to make progress in French since it is the other principal international language of my target location: Africa. I am applying concurrently to your especially distinguished programs in International Affairs and Globalisation, Gender and Development at XXXX for a variety of reasons, most of all your status as a leading world centre for the study of development with an explicit focus on gender. I see myself as a very good fit for your program because of the way in which my goals dovetail so nicely with your mission, promoting economic growth through the support of progressive social change, examining relationships and paradigms between sovereign states in a continuously evolving international system, implementing reforms that root out corruption and prejudice and especially discrimination against or the repression of women. Throughout African history and continuing on into the present day innocent women in Africa have often if not generally served as pawns in male power struggles that simmer for decades. We are in need, therefore, of a search for novel and creative ways to root out the practice of retribution in our cultures, learn to better mitigate conflicts, and foster the institutionalization of democratic practices throughout the region. In this way we will be able to produce leaders who will effect positive change and empower our peoples, making them more aware of what is entailed in the exercise of their basic human rights with the power of education! A Nigerian woman celebrating her graduation with an MA in International Affairs in the UK, standing proudly in her cap and gown with a diploma in hand. I am a product of a continent that is often misconstrued by observers as primarily a region plagued by war, poverty, political instability and disease. While these elements are present all too often, this is from the perspective of the half-empty glass. From the perspective of a glass that is half full, Africa is a continent that is striving against enormous odds to find its own path. I see people every day who defy the odds to smile in the face of adversity and display vast levels of humanity despite their often wretched circumstances. I seek to better understand this so as to equip myself to contribute to effective social change. At an early age, I developed an audacious personality and a voracious appetite for all things human rights- oriented. This character has always been encouraged and empowered by the support of my politically progressive family. My Grandfather, XXXX, set the family trail blazing as a minister under the Premier of the Eastern Region, Dr. XXXX, during the First Republic. My Father was also politically successful, becoming a federal minister twice and Chairman of the Urban Development Bank of Nigeria. My late Mother rose from the position of State Magistrate to become a Justice of the Court of Appeals. She emerged first amongst all high court judges in the federation in the number of judgments and rulings she produced over a given time in an assessment of high court judges carried out by the National Judicial Council. My Paternal Uncle, Dr. XXXX, was the Governor of Enugu State during the ill-fated Third Republic and rose to become the National Chairman of the People’s Democratic Party (PDP) in 2010. In fact, most of my father’s siblings are engaged in politics and I enjoy very much having this legacy to build upon and family to call on for support, guidance, or simply family love; it is a formidable legacy to uphold. Concurring with Socrates that ‘The unexamined life is not worth living’, I completed my undergraduate studies mostly in the areas of Philosophy and Politics, earning my BA Degree in Diplomatic Studiess from the University of XXXX. This program enabled me to embark on the path towards fulfilling my professional goals through a critical examination of foreign affairs, international relations, and global issues among States. My focus through my studies has always been on international affairs and relations and I look forward to building on this as a graduate student concerned first and foremost with Africa’s relations with the rest of the world. My undergraduate education has enabled me to become a quite learner in the area of international affairs and a creative thinker whose passion surfaces naturally with questions of Africa on the one hand, and social justice one the other. I long to become a part of the international character and flavour of XXXX and rub shoulders with the best and brightest students from around the world, learning from them as well as my professors, always with an eye towards the study of international impressions of Africa and the extent to which this is commensurate with the reality. I have enormously excited about the prospect of studying the complete spectrum of courses offered by your programme and I would be profoundly honored to be part of the XXXX academic community. I am hoping to vastly broaden my skill set at XXX and enhance my strategic, analytical and professional skills with respect to a wide range of gender and development policy issues set in complex institutional and regulatory environments because I hope to effect positive change in my community as a public servant dedicated primarily to economic development that at the same time promotes respect for human rights, especially that of women and children. I embarked on intensive research projects during the course of my undergraduate studies involving an analysis of resources in the Niger Delta Region of Nigeria, theories of distributive justice and disparities between the wealthy and the poor, realities of globalisation and global poverty and its attendant justifications, etc. I interned as an assistant on a professional research project which analysed the principles of the free movement of persons within the context of the Economic Community of West Africa (ECOWAS). I was also a key participant on a project which examined alternative dispute resolution in civil justice systems in Nigeria and the impact of social media on the 2011 Nigerian election. My researching skills progressively improved as I transitioned between projects. My professional, academic and personal experiences have prepared me for a variety of development, administrative and project-oriented duties. Over a period of 8 years, I have had the privilege of working on assignments for the UN, the BBC, and the ECOWAS Commission/Parliament. My experience with these institutions has broadened my practical knowledge concerning how our international legal, business, and political systems function in practice, policy formulation and application, and the dynamics that both drive and can also hinder project implementation and economic growth. In my current role, I work with a team of migration experts to enhance the migration management capacity of ECOWAS Member States and ensure Member States comply with regional decisions and agreements. Recently, we realized a notable feat with the adoption by the ECOWAS Heads of Authority and Government of an ECOWAS biometric ID card for mobility of ECOWAS community citizens across borders in the ECOWAS region. I made highly significant contributions to the development of this policy. Along with a team of experts, I am currently in the process of implementing key actions within the project ranging from the development of a regional database platform for data exchange on traveler identification, to harmonization of immigration procedures, high level advocacy and sensitization exercises, along with the production of a secure biometric ID specimen acceptable to all Member States. The accomplishment of this objective would foster free movement of goods, people and services in the region and thereby combat irregular mobility, harassment at the borders, boosting trade within the region at the same time. I feel deeply honored to be an integral part of this process. My long term goal is to serve in public office and be part of a team which reforms the political and economic climate of our region by formulating effective policies that generate socio-economic development of the ECOWAS region and combat social injustices. This is why I seek to undertake a Masters in your renowned institution. I feel this degree will equip me with the skills necessary to attain this goal. My Father is an alumni of XXXX, and not only would I be sustaining a family tradition, but I would be benefiting from an institution distinguished for producing countless brilliant minds, as evident in my father’s success. My passion for human rights has further inspired my participation in humanitarian initiatives such as my work with the Sickle Cell Foundation, West African Civil Society Organisation and various other NGO’s. In the course of my studies I have held various positions of leadership; I was a School Prefect in high school, ‘A’ level school, the President of the International Bureau at A-level school, and the treasurer of the African-Caribbean Society in University. I co-founded a breast cancer foundation, (BREAST CANCER WOMEN CARE) in memory of my late aunt and members of my family who have been survivors of cancer. The foundation was created to increase the awareness of African Women about cancer, and to provide medical advice and emotional support for the victims and their families. We have managed to organize various seminars and fundraising events, and are currently working on building a fully equipped Cancer Center. I am a member of Amnesty International, and have participated in various projects such as arms control campaigns. I also participated in protests and signed petitions, helping to create awareness by giving a presentation on the need for greater progress in arms control at the Diplomatic Academy and at a youth’s seminar in Lagos, Nigeria. Most recently, my work with WACO involved social and local mobilisation to aid Ebola victims in Liberia. Through the use of social media and outreach programmes, I and a team of friends mobilised the donation of clothes, wash kits and financial aid to support countries plagued by the epidemic. I recently joined St. Vincent de Paul Society in honour of my late mother. It has been quite a rewarding experience helping people first hand who are confronted with various challenges. My own experiences have humbled me and further strengthened my belief that every human has a right to justice and an inalienable right to explore their own potential, making the most of their gifts in the way that they so choose. I thank you for considering me for your competitive program.
- Letter of Appeal International Dentist Program
A dentist from India, a woman and most of all a mother, I was six months pregnant with my daughter when I learned that I was accepted to the dental program at XXXX. While I was elated, it turned out to be disastrous timing. My pregnancy had been very complicated and I began dental school fearing that I was going to lose my baby. I had previously suffered a miscarriage and so much rode on this pregnancy that the stress levels during my first two months studying at XXXX International Dentist Program were enormous. My daughter was born quite ill and the fear of losing her continued during her first two months of life. My mother-in-law, who was helping me with my baby, unexpectedly fractured her arm after only a few weeks after I began dental school, just when I needed her the most because my new-born was still quite ill. Stress-related complications became so acute that my judgment became clouded and I became disoriented, sleepless, crying, a total mess of anxiety, all while struggling day and night to care for my baby. At this moment, unaware that all I needed to do was to tell my faculty advisor that I needed to take the first semester off, out of desperation to meet a deadline, I submitted research work that was not entirely my own and was expelled from the ID Program at XXXX - my appeal was denied. Since this incident, I have engaged in much self-reflection. Why did this happen? What I was thinking back then? I have worked on handling pressure and unexpected challenges and learning how to time manage in more mature ways, attending counseling sessions and doing meditation. I learned that my biggest shortcoming was my failure to discuss my problems with others; instead, keeping them bottled up inside. My daughter is getting bigger and more independent day by day, breastfeeding is drawing to a close and I hunger deep in my heart for a return to full time dentistry, the full pursuit of my profession, my life. If accepted to your DDS for International Dentists Program, I intend to leave my daughter with my mother in India so that I will be able to focus exclusively on my studies in dentistry.. I envision having a professional engagement with dentistry for the rest of my life, both here in the USA as well as back home in India, with the latter efforts being of a voluntary nature. I hope to largely fund and manage a practice geared towards the underserved in India, based on my success here in the USA, where I also look forward to decades in private practice, flying back and forth; I love to fly. There is no insurance system for dental care in India and dental treatment is simply unaffordable for roughly half the population. When I am an older woman, I also look forward to teaching dentistry in India. I have long had a fascination with and profound concern for homeless people. I would hug and kiss them as a little girl sometimes, just finding them alone on the street. Now, as a dentist, I realize that my childhood dream of finding them a place to live, to sleep, is overshadowed still by the joy that I feel providing them with oral health care. If one has a toothache, where one sleeps is of secondary importance. My city, Punjab, back in India, has enormous problems with drug addicted youth, in particular, who live on the street – most of them children and adolescents. I day dream about putting my DDS to work on their behalf if I am granted the exception for which I plead and given another chance to prove myself in a DDS program for international dentists. I have served my community as an oral health professional for more than five years, mostly in India but also here in the USA working as a dental assistant for long periods of time at several dental clinics. I have helped to effectively treat a broad variety of patients and I have also had a share in treatment planning and diagnosis. I especially look forward to research in dental materials, always with an eye towards cost and the development of materials that make dental care more affordable. I always wanted to do something in my life which moves people, leaving a long-lasting and highly positive impact on their lives. I was perhaps most moved as a child when I got my own teeth fixed and the result was my own smile – hitherto my biggest insecurity. Thus, in search of a noble profession with unsurpassed human fulfillment, dentistry was for me a most natural choice. I learned quickly and discovered that healthy and clear communication between a patient and dentist is the central key to successful treatment. Over the course of five years, I passionately provided my sincere services to the community, and was overwhelmed with the gratitude I received from those whom I served. I love dancing, cooking, and travelling. I was basketball team captain at my high school and I am good at acting. Along with my team, we won first place in an acting competition with a play dealing with female fetocide. As a female, a woman dentist, I will always be especially sensitive to the special oral health challenges of underserved women in my community, as well as the underserved generally speaking. I thank you for considering my application. Letter of Appeal International Dentist Program
- PHD Epidemiology Public Health LOR
To Whom It May Concern, My name is XXXX MD and I am writing this letter on behalf of my student XXXX, who is applying to your distinguished PHD Program in Epidemiology at the University of XXXX. I could not recommend XXXX more highly and I am most certain that with her vast experience, prowess, energy and dedication, she will prove herself to be a great asset to your program. I am a Professor of Epidemiology, Medicine, and Pediatrics and I teach primarily in the Department of Epidemiology at the University of XXXX where XXXX is now finishing up her Master’s Degree and hope to begin your program at UXX next year. I first met XXXX during her first semester in our program. She came to me to talk about the Diabetes Prevention Program Outcomes Study (DPPOS), a national NIH project that I work on and serve on the writing group. We talked at length about the potential effects of metformin on cardiac protection and cancer prevention. Over the course of the next few months, we would continue to talk about our research, comparing notes, in particular, about metformin and ongoing studies of its potential to delay the onset of diabetes. I also served as XXXX’s preceptor for her internship practicum in our diabetes program in Rwanda this past summer. I was struck by her high level of devotion to her work, her acumen with both patients and in the lab, which resulted in her immaculate and creative 9-page internship report that she sent me after her field experience was concluded. The document was entitled: “Exploring strategies of sustainability for the program of Life for a Child (LFAC) in Rwanda.” The proposals suggested by XXXX for the achievement of long-term sustainability for our program were especially impressive. We worked closely together for about 5 weeks, along with the other members of our team and Rwandan patients with Type 1 Diabetes. During this period we spent many hours talking not only about advances being made in diabetes research, but also in her area of greatest special interest, cardiovascular health, particularly with respect to epidemiology and pharmacology. This internship in Rwanda required XXXX to adapt to both an entirely new culture and a very primitive health care system virtually overnight, and to rapidly come to understand and respond successfully to numerous challenges involved with respect to both patients and providers. She also moved around the country to work in various cities and remote clinics, demonstrating independence, good clinical judgment, and superlative communication skills with both patients and the local team, further manifest in her poster presentation providing us with data, summary, and her sustainable proposals in graphic form. XXXX is a very well trained doctor of medicine first and foremost, with an in- depth understanding of the challenges on our research frontiers in epidemiology and public health. Her excellence and creativity is virtually unsurpassed from my experience in the area of epidemiology and cardiovascular pharmacology. Thus, I could not recommend her more highly for admission to your Epidemiology program at UXX. I would be happy to provide any further information as to XXXX’s qualifications. Sincerely, PHD Epidemiology Public Health LOR
- Endeavour Scholarship Australia Filipina
Please summarise, in words that can be understood by a person outside your field, details of the proposed programme, why you chose your proposed host organization and what your proposed programme is intended to achieve. Also provide details including proposed dates and locations of any proposed fieldwork and/or internships. A highly professional and very hard working accounting consultant in the Philippines, I began working shortly after my graduation. Since September of 2015, I have been working long hours in business process control and planning and budgeting. My present dream is to have the opportunity to earn a Master’s Degree in International Business in Australia so that I can devote my life to building bridges in business between the Philippines and Australia by making this commerce safer and subsequently more profitable. I grew up in the rural part of my country so I’ve always appreciated the simplicity of life. As I entered the corporate world, I began to see the country’s enormous economic growth potential. While I am very proud to be a woman from the Philippines, frankly, I am ashamed of some aspects of my country, most particularly the endemic corruption, which is invasive, predatory, and taints every aspect of our social, political, and especially economic lives – primarily the root of our country’s paradox of plenty. If I were to be awarded the Endeavor Scholarship and have the opportunity to earn my Master’s Degree in Australia, I would be highly inspired and empowered to turn my attention to cleaning things up in my country, as an accounting professional on the cutting edge of social and economic justice, in collaboration with a broad variety of sectors, legal, law enforcement, and progressive initiatives from the business world in particular. I wish to attend XXXX University of Technology (XXXX) Business School not only for its Triple Crown accreditation, but also due to its unparalleled commitment of forging partnerships with industry. I want to grow on a personal level and become a global citizen of the world, not just the Philippines, and Australia would be the optimal springboard to a global career. Please provide details of how your proposed programme would further your academic and/or professional career. I am working for the XXXX Company which funded my college education and helped my parents with our family's financial burden. But, for the longest time, in my heart, I’ve always hoped to be a teacher. This opportunity to study in a collaborative setting with a diverse student body from all over the world would provide me with the experience that I need to blossom into a fully international business professional and prepare me as well for a teaching career here in the Philippines, training new generations of students in the area of professional ethics and the importance of social responsibility in the business world of today. My central dream for the near future is to contribute to the development of a partnership with XXXX Business School in launching a business summit in the Philippines that would be offered to students enrolled in business courses in the Philippines, providing them with an opportunity to further develop their skills through live discussions and interaction with other students as well as renowned business leaders from different sectors and industries. I plan to invite professors from XXXX Business School to be guest presenters, leading to a partnership that would greatly increasing the prominence and appeal of XXXX in the Philippines. Please provide details of how your proposed programme will benefit Australia and your potential to foster ongoing collaboration and cooperation with your home and host country/region. Earning my Master’s Degree in International Business at XXXX will make me extremely competitive on the job market, in academic and business worlds, for me two sides of the same coin. I personally chose to study in Australia because it will bring to life a place which I've always heard about from my dad, who was a recipient of an Australian government scholarship to complete his Doctorate in Veterinary Science; along with listening to stories about the educational excellence and innovative, creative culture of Australia. I seek to serve my community, my society, and the world. I hope to enrich lives and communicate my knowledge with passion to inspire generations that will follow me in academic and business worlds, building increasingly strong ties with our close neighbour and friend Australia. In particular, I look forward to cultivating a partnership between my alma mater, the University of XXXX, and XXXX Business School. I look forward to sharing the many things of great value that I learn at XXXX with Filipino entrepreneurs for decades to come, helping our economy to grow through integration in an increasingly global world, alongside Australia, learning together how to best exploit opportunities in an increasingly competitive global marketplace. Please explain how receiving an Endeavour scholarship or fellowship would make a difference to your personal life. My father was and always will be the most important role model in my life. My children will grow up listening to stories about their grandfather. Although born with a heart disease that he suffered from throughout his life, he never failed to inspire people around him to achieve their dreams - big, small, imaginable and even improbable. I could spend all day listening to his former students, how happy they were during my dad's lectures. He was a state university professor of Veterinary Medicine. In his spare time, he'd educate the local farmers for free. He found so much joy in teaching and helping. Although it was hard for him to lift heavy objects because of his condition, he was a consistent volunteer in Gawad Kalinga - a nonprofit organization that builds homes for the homeless - one of our favorite things to do with the family during the summer. My father passed away 16 days before I graduated from college. For me, the greatest personal honor, if I were to be awarded an Endeavor Scholarship, would be to honor him. Showing my father how much I love him doesn't stop with his death, it only intensifies. Endeavour Scholarship Australia Filipina
- MBA Accounting Background Saudi Woman
The world of business in my home country, Saudi Arabia, is dominated by males. However, I have met several successful Saudi businesswomen whom I have admired and have a strong desire to emulate them by making my own mark in a masculine dominated business environment. I wish to acquire the skills and knowledge to enable me emulate my ‘heroines’ and believe that your MBA program will be an excellent means of doing so. My special interest is in the leisure industry. I hope to join a company in that sector at a senior level and, ultimately, to found such a business in Saudi Arabia. My government is actively seeking to encourage the founding of businesses in new sectors as it seeks to curtail its reliance on the oil industry. It is my intention to be one of the innovators who will help to successfully diversify our economy, make a success of life and provide the same opportunity to others while providing joyful experiences to my consumers. The Government of Saudi Arabia created a body called the General Authority for Entertainment in May 2016 to encourage businesses in that sector which is regarded as being one of those which is important to the development of the national economy. I hold a B.S in Accounting with GPA 3.44 and am currently engaged as an intern in accounting duties. This background has provided me with an excellent knowledge base to begin the study of business. I admit that my GRE was not ‘stellar’ but I was faced with unexpected and extreme time constraints. The score does not reflect my intelligence, diligence or my academic potential and in view of the very limited study time involved, I believe the result to be excellent. Since my early teens, I have sought leadership and team building experience in seeking and obtaining various offices in school and college clubs and societies. I have a wide variety of interests and hobbies, which includes the informal study of psychology, this provides useful insights generally and will, I believe, be of great use to me in a future career in the world of business. I am always ready to ‘take charge’ in difficult situations and to execute considered but decisive action. I am a confident and effective communicator who understands that listening is as important as talking and who is sensitive to non-verbal signals from others. I get on easily with others and enjoy collaboration to achieve a common goal. I am fairly well travelled. I enjoy learning about new cultures and in sharing knowledge of my own. I am a native speaker of Arabic and am fully fluent and proficient in English. I have carefully considered the commitment that will be required of me in the program and am eager to study alongside equally ambitious and intelligent students in the challenging and supportive environment that I am confident will be provided. It is my intention to excel rather than just succeed and will apply myself enthusiastically and diligently to the program. MBA Accounting Background Saudi Woman
- MA Master's Child Study and Education
My decision to pursue a Master’s degree in this discipline results from a deeply felt desire to make a positive difference in the lives of children. I believe that the substantial child related voluntary activities that I have undertaken together with the success that I have enjoyed in my undergraduate psychology studies, involvement in research work and continuing informal study in the subject have provided a very firm foundation for my successful involvement in the program. I have always felt an affinity for children and had a general understanding of the immense importance of early experiences in shaping adult behavior. However my passion to study child-centered psychology was really fired during the second year of my undergraduate studies during the Child Developmental course. I watched a one year old child repeatedly throwing a spoon on the floor and observed the concentration and interest etched on his tiny face as he analyzed the relationship between the causes and effects involved. I was as fascinated by him and his reactions just as much as he was by watching the spoon arc through the air before it struck the floor each time. I realized that I was watching an experiment being successfully conducted by a tiny infant and felt enthralled as well as privileged to be a witness to it. I also understood that just as one care giver might consider this action in the same light as I did, another might regard it as irritating and pointless behavior and that this difference in understanding and attitude would have an effect on the child’s next ‘experiment’ and the results could be pivotal to the child’s whole future development and outlook. I was ‘hooked’ and a determination to study the subject was fired and I have not wavered in that decision since. Another aspect of developmental studies that particularly fascinated me involves the dramatic effects on a child arising from the quality of his/her relationship with caregivers. The importance of security and consistency of care provision in the shaping of a child’s positive self image, promotion of emotional stability and consequent success in relationships, academic achievement and general well being can hardly be overstated, as has been demonstrated in so many studies. If we can persuade a sufficient number of deficient caregivers of the long term effects of their relationship and attitude to the child, we can go some way to improving society as well as the life of the individual child. My interest in the subject has deepened in the time since I made my initial decision and I carefully read the latest published research on the subject. For instance I have just become aware of very recent research demonstrating that a child who has been bullied by a sibling is between two and four times more likely to be bullied in school. The role of siblings on child development has perhaps not been fully explored and is an area in which further fruitful research might be undertaken and I would love to be involved in doing so. I am also fascinated by the fact that the ‘nature versus nurture’ debate still continues. Though I tend towards the ‘tabla rasa’ theory, I remain open- minded and look forward to the day when research resolves the issue and we can see how practice can be amended to take account of the outcome. I concluded, some time ago, that there were few subjects as worthy of study and research as developmental psychology. One of my life aims has always been to ‘add to the sum of human happiness’ and I cannot see any better way than by pursuing studies, research and practical involvement in this vital subject. I have worked as a Research Assistant in the Department of Psychology at the University of XXXX and enjoyed the work very much. I understand that successful research requires particular characteristics such as intellectual curiosity, determination, diligence and an ability to maintain very high level of interest in the area of focus. I am convinced that I possess these characteristics and it is my long term goal to be a successful researcher in this field and to pass on my knowledge to others. I am aware that cultural sensitivity and awareness is essential in this area of study and work. I have happily interacted with people of many cultural and social backgrounds since moving to Canada, six years ago. I have worked as a volunteer in various capacities to broaden my exposure to others, to learn more about my fields of interest as well as ‘giving something back’ to those less fortunate than myself. I enjoy being exposed to new cultures and enjoy sharing information about my own. I also possess a well developed sense of humor and fun that enables me to relate well to others and especially to children. I have significant practical experience of working with children from a wide spectrum of cultures and social situations as a volunteer in Summer Camps, a playschool and by involvement in the ‘Peace by Peace’ project at the University of XXXX. This practical engagement with children of various ages, types and backgrounds has been immensely valuable and has strengthened my determination to work for their betterment. Among a few of the important things that I learned are: the need to treat each child as an individual and recognize that being ‘different’ is not necessarily problematic; the value of looking for the child who ‘hangs back’ and encourage them to become involved; the vital role of creativity and play in the learning process; and the importance of being highly observant and being sensitive to non-verbal communication and responding appropriately to such signals. Perhaps the most important fact that I learned was that each session was just as much a learning opportunity for me as for the children. The feeling of satisfaction gained when one sees a child grasp a concept or share a toy for the first time is truly immense. I have carefully researched the available programs and regard that offered at the Institute is by far the ‘best fit’ for my purposes. I seek to join a challenging program in a supportive academic environment and wish to have the opportunity for a significant amount of practical experience. Naturally, I am also looking for an impressive faculty with a reputation for undertaking ‘cutting edge’ research. I am also interested in ensuring that satisfying and challenging employment is likely to be available to me once I have qualified. I believe that the program fully meets all these criteria. I know that there will be many well qualified applicants for the program but I genuinely believe that I am an exceptional candidate. I hold a degree in a relevant subject; I am an academically successful; I have research experience in a related field; I have significant practical experience of engaging with children; but my main recommendation is a genuine and heart-felt passion for helping children to realize their potential for success and happiness.













