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MSC Veterinary Medicine Personal Statement Service

  • Writer: Robert Edinger
    Robert Edinger
  • Oct 3, 2024
  • 3 min read

Updated: Jan 10


A smiling vet in a white coat holds a puppy with a stethoscope. Shelves with colorful bottles and teddy bears in the background.
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I have always aspired to pursue a career in veterinary medicine, where I can merge my empathy for animals with my analytical abilities and scientific passions. As a child, I was tasked with caring for our household pets and was fascinated by their husbandry and care, whether at home or at the vet's. I remain interested in current animal welfare issues, such as the foot and mouth outbreak and, more recently, Blue Tongue. Consequently, I found Biology at A-level captivating, particularly in understanding the immune response in animals, and I especially enjoyed delving into animal physiology. Mathematics has enhanced my ability to think logically, an essential skill for tackling a problem-oriented course. A-level English Language has allowed me to explore persuasive writing and build strong arguments in support of ethical animal research. I believe that being a Veterinary surgeon would offer a career that is both challenging and rewarding in our evolving society.


During 9 weeks of work experience, I observed how Biology connects with animal care and welfare. While spending time in an Australian zoo, shadowing a keeper, I learned why feeding animals Lucerne was nutritionally beneficial due to its nitrogen-fixing bacteria in root nodules. This placement helped me improve my organizational skills. By managing the sorting of feeds, I ensured all animals received proper care. Working with primates and marsupials sparked my interest in exotic animals.


At a city farm, I developed animal handling skills with a wide range of animals. Time on a working farm highlighted the interdependence between humans and animals. I observed the contrasts between commercial and economic trade conditions and animal-environment interactions. I demonstrated my ability to work independently and handle pressure when complications arose. I assisted the farmer during lambing, checking for birth-related issues. My capacity to manage intense situations was further enhanced through a Marine Mammal Medic qualification at a VetSim conference. The ability to work under pressure is invaluable for Veterinary surgeons performing complex and time-sensitive operations.


These placements underscored the importance of proper animal care and husbandry, and my experience at the RSPCA provided insight into the consequences of inadequate care. During my time assisting at a stable, I gained crucial knowledge about common equine health issues, such as how reducing time spent in fields and on hard surfaces can prevent Laminitis. Two weeks at a small animal veterinary practice reinforced the veterinary surgeon's professional role in administering care. I observed animals from initial diagnoses through surgical procedures and recovery, witnessing routine operations like spaying and neutering as well as complex surgeries including lumpectomies. While working at a Pet Food Superstore, I developed effective communication skills with pet owners, particularly in helping them select the best diet for their animals.


My interest in organisms and their environments led me to join my school's Eco-team, where I help organize a conference and raise awareness on issues such as energy conservation and recycling. I have achieved my Silver Duke of Edinburgh Award with Explorer Scouts and am working towards Gold, demonstrating my determination to achieve set goals. I am an avid martial artist, currently holding a Brown belt in Tae Kwon Do. I play the flute at Grade 7 Distinction level and aim to take Grade 8. These activities showcase my perseverance and determination, qualities I believe are crucial for becoming a veterinary surgeon. I possess the drive, skill, and genuine interest to excel in this course, and I look forward to it with great motivation and enthusiasm.


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Dec 24, 2025
Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

Your statement is engaging, detailed, and full of genuine passion, and what makes it especially compelling is the way you weave together your lifelong love of animals with a clear, evidence‑based understanding of what veterinary medicine truly requires. You don’t simply say you care about animals—you demonstrate it through years of hands‑on experience, academic preparation, and personal commitment.

One of the strongest aspects of your writing is the clarity with which you articulate your motivation. From caring for pets as a child to following major animal‑welfare issues like foot‑and‑mouth disease and Blue Tongue, you show that your interest in veterinary medicine has deep roots. Your academic choices reinforce this: Biology for its insight into physiology and immune responses, Mathematics for…

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