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MA Biotechnology Medicine Personal Purpose Statement

  • Writer: Robert Edinger
    Robert Edinger
  • Jul 19, 2024
  • 2 min read

Updated: 6 days ago


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As a 22-year-old woman born and raised in New York, I cherish my hometown and regard XXXX as the premier educational institution in NYC. I aspire to a long and fruitful career as a research professional in laboratories focused on utilizing biotechnology to address human needs in medicine, industry, and agriculture—areas that precisely define Columbia's program. I am requesting the opportunity to enroll in one or two graduate-level courses at Columbia to demonstrate my commitment and capability as an outstanding graduate student. Ultimately, my goal is to become a full-time student pursuing an M.A. Degree in Biotechnology.


I am confident in my ability to perform well, holding a B.S. in Biological Anthropology from George Washington University with a minor in Biology. I have completed pre-medical coursework and possess extensive professional experience in relevant fields. I am an extremely dedicated and hard-working student with a long-term focus on achieving professional success and contributing to scientific progress. As a strong advocate for high professional standards, I am committed to dedicating myself entirely to my studies at XXXX if given the chance. I am highly motivated to study and become a skilled biotechnology research professional, believing this is where I can make a significant contribution to humanity.


My primary goal is to leave a lasting impact as a research scientist, tackling the complex biotechnological challenges faced by modern society, which still requires innovative and productive scientific advancements. This is why I aim to dedicate my life to research in medicine, drug approval regulation, and the management and organizational issues related to healthcare and the production of food and medicine.


As a young Jewish woman, I have worked diligently throughout my life, continuously learning. I am fluent in Spanish, English, and Hebrew. I consider myself a global citizen, well-read and well-traveled, having spent significant time in China and Israel. This has given me a deep appreciation for diversity and cross-cultural harmony, bridging cultural gaps for the sake of scientific progress. A key aspect of my application to your program is my extensive professional and volunteer experience at XXXX Medical Center in NY, where I served as an Ambulatory Clinician intern with a special focus on Pediatric Hematology/Oncology. My dedication and perseverance in Anthropology and Archaeology were recognized by the International Scholar Laureate Program in China, where I worked on various archaeological sites throughout the country. This experience, in particular, has deepened my appreciation for diversity and cross-cultural communication.


MA Biotechnology Medicine Personal Purpose Statement



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Yasmeen Abu-Saleh
Dec 11, 2025
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This draft is a strong and inspiring statement that clearly conveys both academic preparation and personal depth. It highlights a remarkable combination of intellectual rigor, cultural fluency, and professional experience. The applicant demonstrates a clear vision for her future in biotechnology, with a focus on medicine, industry, and agriculture—fields that are central to addressing pressing global challenges. What stands out most is the balance between academic achievement and real-world engagement. Holding a B.S. in Biological Anthropology with a minor in Biology, completing pre-medicine coursework, and gaining hands-on experience at XXXX Medical Center all underscore her readiness for graduate-level study. Her devotion to Pediatric Hematology/Oncology and participation in the International Scholar Laureate Program in China further emphasize her seriousness, persistence, and…

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