MBA Information Systems Sample 1st Paragraph

I am a young woman from India who is now advancing her career and making a new home here in America. Before leaving India I did two things that I am especially proud of: I earned my MBA and spent many long hours working for a foundation that protects animals. I did this out of a profound sense of social and humanitarian service, following the example of my parents who taught me that the most important thing in life and by far the most rewarding is to serve humanity and our planetary home. This is why I want very much to earn an MBA here in America as well, one with a central focus on informatics. As a result of my background, interests, and passion, it is in this area that I feel strongly that I will be able to make my fullest contribution.