Multilingual Asian MS Architecture Personal Purpose
- Robert Edinger
- Oct 15, 2024
- 3 min read
Updated: 4 days ago

As a US citizen born and raised in Taiwan, I am a dedicated architecture student who has diligently prepared to join your Master's in Architecture Program at XXXX. Your program is my top choice because I consider it the best of its kind globally. I believe my diverse undergraduate education at XXXX University in Design and Development, Supply Chain, Information Sciences and Technology, Business, and the Liberal Arts equips me to thrive in your challenging program at XXXX. I am drawn to your comprehensive and creative curriculum, as well as the extensive resources available, such as The XXXX Institute of Design and the BEST lab.
I am eager to fully immerse myself in architecture to devise solutions through innovative designs. Beyond acquiring the necessary skills for architectural excellence, I aim to concentrate on architectural/building technology and the integration of information technology (IT) and data to enhance decision-making for more efficient, sustainable structures. I have chosen architecture as my career path because it allows me to maximize my societal contributions, benefiting both my local community and the global society. I am excited to contribute to the diversity of XXXX as a Chinese woman committed to multiculturalism. Fluent in Spanish, which I studied for several years in high school in Taiwan, I am eager to learn how to create sustainable societies that harmonize with our environments, achieving the highest quality of life for future generations. I look forward to learning from peers worldwide, especially from Latin America, as well as from professors and guest speakers.
My intellectual and professional passions center around technology and research, gathering data on everything from natural resources to human behavior patterns in an ongoing quest for better decision-making and improved building design. I eagerly anticipate a lifetime of studying and exploring the best methods to optimize local resources, designing and implementing the cleanest, most effective processes for sustainable structures that align with both natural and human environments.
The company I work for, XXXX, is currently collaborating extensively with the Golden State Warriors Arena in San Francisco to reinvent an immersive experience at the Chase Center. This multi-year project will engage the community through a program called “Fannovate,” where fans can contribute ideas for consideration during the Chase Center's construction. Leading this initiative will enhance my success at XXXX and provide valuable insights to share both in and outside the classroom.
I aim for full engagement in a long professional career, seeking and facilitating novel commercial opportunities that drive innovation. In designing an educational institution, I would strive to create an optimal learning environment by promoting collaboration. If designing a home for the elderly, I would develop a space that is accessible and encourages self-reliance, empowering the elderly to live with dignity. I would leverage technology to monitor factors that enhance the building's functional purposes and create optimal user experiences. I am committed to mastering innovative software in architectural design and seek comprehensive training in utilizing information technology to foster a more sustainable environment. I wish to learn everything about architecture and innovative building technology developments, incorporating data (IT) into building technology to make informed predictions for creative designs.
After earning my master's at XXXX, I plan to start my career at an architecture firm, gaining practical experience and working towards becoming a licensed architect. I hope to join a firm that allows me to engage in research on technological advancements for our firm and the industry.
With a strong IT background and a deep passion for innovation, I continuously seek new ways to enhance current practices. Besides excelling as a student and professional, I have volunteered to give back to society, translating letters from Mandarin to English for World Vision for a year. I volunteered at an animal shelter during college for a semester and enjoy playing piano. I auditioned and was accepted into the jazz band in high school. I also studied IB music for two years in high school, learning music theory, history, and composition, and participated in ballroom dancing, placing sixth in a small competition. I love learning new languages and continue to improve my Spanish, which I began studying in high school.
Thank you for considering my application to the Master's in Architecture Program at XXXX.
Multilingual Asian MS Architecture Personal Purpose






The applicant conveys a deep and genuine passion for architecture, describing it as the best vehicle to maximize their contribution to society. Their enthusiasm for sustainable design and innovative building technology makes the statement inspiring and forward-looking. A broad undergraduate background in design, supply chain, IT, business, and liberal arts demonstrates intellectual versatility. This multidisciplinary foundation positions the applicant to excel in a rigorous architecture program and to integrate diverse perspectives into their work. The applicant thoughtfully aligns their interests with the program’s strengths, citing resources such as the Institute of Design and BEST lab. Their focus on architectural/building technology and IT integration shows careful preparation and compatibility with the program’s emphasis on innovation. Current involvement in the Golden State…