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MBA Personal Statement of Purpose Editing Service Example


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I have taught a broad variety of students along the way. And, as an educational administrator, I have dealt with the concerns of an equally broad variety of parents with many different concerns. The joy that I have found over the years in both positions, teacher, and administrator, has been enormous. Even though I majored in Economics and had worked in the field of Finance, I always dreamed of becoming a highly effective teacher capable of helping children and their parents to prosper through a fuller appreciation of the importance of making the most of one’s educational opportunities.


I longed to become a mentor to help people to lead happier and fuller lives. I began developing a career as an English teacher, although I knew from the beginning that I did not want to stay in a teaching position. Later, I accepted a position in consultation and management, assisting Korean students with all the details involved in living abroad for more than 3 years, as well as preparing for specialized examinations for entry into South Korea’s highly competitive university system.


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I am most pleased to have had this opportunity to experience and learn from a highly diverse pool of students, some coming from Africa, others from Russia, etc. As someone who went through this process himself in the US, I have been able to understand and relate well to students that experience anxiety because of beginning university studies in a foreign language and culture.


 What I was aiming for all along, however, was more than a simple teaching or educational counseling position. I wanted to run my own educational initiative, although I had limited capital with which to operate. I was fortunate, however, to have been hired by the ____ Language Corporation, run by individual contractors (mostly teachers). For top performers, there has been ample room for upward mobility and the CEO offered me the opportunity of launching new endeavors at the highest level. As a result, I have been working at the heart of curriculum research and development for several years.


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 I have also been able to publish my own books. Even though few copies have sold, this experience has boosted my confidence as an educator. Nevertheless, the passion that I used to have for my work is withering and I need new challenges. I want very much to study towards the MBA Degree at the University of ____ because I realize that education is fundamentally business, and I look forward to full time immersion in the professional study of the business of education.


My wife is from Toronto; thus, it is my second home. I have visited U__ and I am most impressed by how friendly people are. Toronto also has a high ratio of Koreans, many suffering from language barriers, struggling to assimilate while they maintain their cultural identities, and I want very much to study this population. An MBA from your program would help me to launch increasingly creative educational initiatives, especially for Korean students.


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I invite you to fill out my Interview Form at this link. Even if you have a draft, the information on the interview form is often helpful and serves as the basis for me to make creative improvements to the statement. I spend more time with the statement for my premium service customers at US$299.00; this is especially true when it comes to making major contributions to creative ideas. My standard service at US$199.00 is for clients who already have a well-developed draft. My premium service is for clients who want my ultimate effort and further revision after they have a chance to make changes. ​

All samples published on this website are anonymous and at least two years old. Prices on the website are negotiable.

While I would enjoy talking to my clients on the telephone, I need your information in text form . Since I am always working with several different clients at the same time, if I took the information over the phone, I might tend to confuse your stories.

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