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Executive MBA Personal Statement Example

  • Writer: Robert Edinger
    Robert Edinger
  • Sep 23
  • 4 min read

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Executive MBA Personal Purpose

I hope to earn the Executive MBA Degree at the ____ School, to continue improving the lives of communities as a healthcare executive, investing resources to advance the health of the company that I work for as well as those whom we serve. A medical doctor originally from Iraq, since 2011, I have been serving as the Executive Vice President and Chief Operations Officer of the ____ Group, a billion-dollar company seeking to enhance public health infrastructure through the development of clinical operations around the globe. I have helped to oversee the development of clinical initiatives and facilities in the Middle East, gaining organizational and leadership experience in a variety of areas related to the development and management of medical facilities. Finishing medical school in Iraq in 2006, it was a great privilege to be hired by my current employer and play a strategic role in the opening of three healthcare clinics, between 2009 and 2011, in the UAE, Qatar, and Pakistan. 

 

My central short-term goal is to earn the MBA at the____ School of Management at ____ University. My long-term goal is to become an executive leader of a leading healthcare/medical research institute, helping to develop a socially responsible corporate structure and culture, employing sustainable business practices, and conducting medical research for the advancement of global medicine.  

 

Born and raised in Iraq and witnessing the acute circumstances of my home country in terms of a chronic lack of adequate medical care, I vowed to do my best to become a public servant as well as a medical doctor and to never forget where I came from, the Global South. My extensive efforts in the non-profit sector of health care, helping non-profit organizations to excel and to expand their operations, have recently been rewarded by my receiving a Medal of Honor from Her Majesty Queen Elizabeth, for my contribution to humanitarian work around the globe. I include my honorary certificate with this application.  

 

I am determined to do all that I can to make the world a better place and I am convinced that my maximum contribution will be as an executive leader in healthcare At the same time, I look forward to continuing to spend much of my free time working on behalf of non-profit projects and mentoring new leaders, especially talented people from developing countries.  

 

It is my sincere hope that the ____ School, a world leader in critical thinking and social responsibility in healthcare management, will look with favor upon my application, so that I may give my all to mastering the intricacies of healthcare development for both private-sector and non-profit initiatives. 


My country, Iraq, has been plagued by warfare and political unrest for decades with disastrous consequences for health care. Early on, searching for hope, I focused on young people, since it is they who are key to rebuilding communities that have been devastated by years of strife coupled to a great scarcity of resources. I have done what has been within my grasp to help steer young people in Iraq in the right direction, towards service rather than strife, gradually building greater infrastructure and developing training programs; so that, little by little, Iraqi society can provide increasing levels of effective health care to the people. 

 

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Executive MBA Personal Statement Help

Community outreach has always been a major part of my life. While I have been involved in many community outreach projects, I am particularly proud of my involvement with Syrian refugee camps in Jordan. In March of 2016, I started visiting the Syrian refugee camps in Jordan (Azraq & Zaatari). The heart-breaking stories were many and the sadness can be overwhelming at times, especially after a long day with throngs of orphan children, many of whom continue to cry constantly for their mother, father, or both. While working in the camps, these children from Syria were my community in a moral, intellectual, and even an emotional sense. Caring for them was like caring for human life itself in some transcendent fashion. I felt more alive as a human being in these camps than ever before, and my work on behalf of these people came to define who I was. 

 

It was not long before I noticed that there was next to nothing available in the camps in terms of eye care. Complicated eye cases were referred to Jordanian public hospitals and one had to wait many months. I reached out to Bascom Palmer eye institute in Miami and teamed up with them to establish a mobile eye clinic with all the necessary equipment, moving between the different refugee camps in the region.  

 

I shared a native language with the people that I treated in the refugee camps in Jordan, and they became my community in the fullest sense of the term. I loved them as if they were my own little nieces and nephews and this made me highly motivated to do all that I could for them. In some ways, this helped me to recover from the way that my own tranquility and innocence had been violently shattered in Iraq in 2003.  

 

Since then, my passion for community outreach has matured and developed, and I now think of it mostly in terms of infrastructure, rather than individual faces. In fact, the community that I now seek most to help is the underserved globally. 


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