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- Sample 1st Paragraph, PHD Degree in Sociology, Kuwait
I am a student of sociology from Kuwait with an undergraduate degree from my home country and an MA Degree in Sociology from XXXX University London (UK) 2008. My long term goal is to teach sociology at Kuwait University, a position for which I need to earn the PHD Degree. My first choice for continuing my studies on the doctoral level is XXXX State University because I very much admire your focus on the family as well as your comprehensive treatment of methodology.
- Sample 1st Paragraph Masters Digital Media, Indian Woman
As a young Indian woman who could not be more passionate for digital media and marketing, I am especially sensitive about issues of social justice and equality and the protection of human rights. Thus, I see digital social media and advertising as opportunities for progressive social change, especially with respect to the image of woman. I am disturbed by the way that a woman’s body has always been exploited by media and I am particularly concerned with the way that this has helped to create a society in my country, India, where women are frequently brutally raped in public by gangs of young men that have been totally failed by our educational and communications systems. Sometimes, these attacks are fatal.
- Sample 1st Paragraph Undergraduate Financial Actuarial Mathematics
I am applying for entry to the undergraduate program in Financial Actuarial Mathematics. My reason for doing so is a love of, and an aptitude for, mathematics combined with a strong interest in the way that businesses operate and reach decisions. My family owns a business in which I have worked and, during this time, I have become increasingly aware of the fact that almost every business decision involves risk and that in many cases the decision maker can be greatly assisted in reaching the right decision by the quantification of the risk that they are facing. My ambition is to become an actuarial consultant aiding businesses, particularly small businesses, at times in which management is taking significant business decisions involving major changes, in order to avoid business failure or significant financial loss.
- Sample 1st paragraph, MS Applied Mathematics and Statistics, Chinese
Your MS Degree in Applied and Computational Mathematics and Statistics Program at XXXX is my first choice for graduate school because of my profound admiration for both the interdisciplinary character of your program and your emphasis on practical applications for business and commerce. I am a Chinese woman now living in America who earned her undergraduate and Master’s degrees in Spacecraft Engineering back in China. I have now been in America for 3 years. My daughter was born here and I have been a stay-at-home mom, improving my English and working at home as well. Most recently I have been analyzing data for two professors, one at Northwestern University and the other in India, in the area of Gen Y’s attitude towards Mobile Applications and In-app Advertising. Since my daughter will soon go to school, I want very much to go back to school as well.
- Journalism, Master's Degree, Chinese Applicant
Becoming a world class journalist without national boundaries is my goal, acting always in the public interest and staying loyal to the truth to the extent to which it is possible to do so – especially in China. I look forward to a long professional lifetime of conversation with people from all walks of life, embracing the intellectual diversity of multicultural minds. I aspire to have the courage to step on the toes of important entities. The MA Program in Journalism at XXXX University if my first choice for graduate school because …
- Joint Degree PHD IR MA Latin American Studies Sample 1st
Few men from Africa end up making Latin America their home. The fact that I have now accompanied my wife of 2 years to her native Colombia for no less than 9 lengthy visits, adopting her home as my own, provides me with unique opportunities to become a voice for the developing world, the global south. While born in the USA and raised here for most of my life, I have also spent long periods of time, 2 years on one visit, back home in Africa, my parents having immigrated from Monrovia, Liberia shortly before I was born. With my roots in Africa and my destiny in Latin America, I hope to make my mark in the study of international relations with a special emphasis on the importance of enhancing solidarity, scholarly exchange, and economic collaboration between Africa and Latin America, comparative study and action, networking with governments, NGOs, and collaborating with the UN on projects as well.
- MA International Relations Sample 1st Paragraph Indian
My keen desire as an Indian woman to earn a Masters Degree in International Relations is born from the conflict and tragedy that my own family has endured in India. I lost loved ones that were most dear to my heart in the string of terror attacks that swept India in 2008. It is my hope, therefore, after completing your distinguished MA Program at XXXX University, to build a career as a diplomat and a peacemaker, especially with respect to relations between India and its neighbors Pakistan and Bangladesh.
- MBA Information Systems Sample 1st Paragraph
I am a young woman from India who is now advancing her career and making a new home here in America. Before leaving India I did two things that I am especially proud of: I earned my MBA and spent many long hours working for a foundation that protects animals. I did this out of a profound sense of social and humanitarian service, following the example of my parents who taught me that the most important thing in life and by far the most rewarding is to serve humanity and our planetary home. This is why I want very much to earn an MBA here in America as well, one with a central focus on informatics. As a result of my background, interests, and passion, it is in this area that I feel strongly that I will be able to make my fullest contribution.
- MS Geology Water Resources 1st Paragraph Statement of Purpose
Like most Americans, I grew up accepting that clean water is abundantly and permanently available. As my interest in Geology developed, I wondered at the sophisticated and complex means by which this literally vital asset is made available to us. When I became aware that many of the world’s population lack access to sufficient water or have access only to water that may carry disease, I made a decision that I would seek to acquire the skills and knowledge to enable me to do something to help those deprived of adequate supplies of clean water. It is my ultimate objective to obtain a leading role in a company or NGO concerned with finding and implementing solutions and to become an Associate Professor of Geology, sharing my knowledge and passion for this life-giving field of study and work with others.
- Petroleum Engineering Sample 1st Paragraph for the Master’s Degree
A 26-year-old woman from Mexico, I am profoundly dedicated to the goal of serving my country, as well as society generally speaking; I seek to do this by doing all that I can to assure that our petroleum industry is upgraded to the highest level of operational standards world-wide with respect to productivity and efficiency as well as safety. I see the Master’s Program at XXXX University to be one of the worldwide leaders in our industry and I see you program as a good fit for my long term interests as a petroleum industry professional.
- MS Geology, Geophysics 1st Paragraph
I struggled to reconcile my interests, skills, and passion with the selection of a major for my first two years of college until I took my first Geology course. Since that time, geology and geophysics have stood at the center of my world. In my Energy, Fossil Fuel and Society class at Purdue University I discovered a great deal about how the exploration sector operates within the energy industry and I became increasingly fascinated. This led me to further individual research involving seismic method applications, particularly near-surface seismology and 3D shallow reflection.
- PHD in African Studies Sample 1st Paragraph
I obtained my LLB in my home country, Ethiopia and completed my LLM at Howard University. It is perhaps ironic that I have come to truly love Africa the most, and to have profound hope for her, only as a result of coming to America and completing my LLM at Howard. My short term professional dream is to be a university professor in my home country. I see your particularly distinguished PHD program in African Studies at XXXX University as the best fit for my interests given your thoroughgoing and interdisciplinary focus on development and public policy. My heart is back in Ethiopia and I want to return well prepared for my maximum contribution. Development Studies are still in their infancy in Africa and there is much work to be done. After teaching in Ethiopia for a few years, I hope to move on and become engaged with a regional organization such as the African Union, always working on development issues and making good use of my legal background.


