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  • MA Development Studies, Saudi, Empowerment of Women

    A cosmopolitan woman from Saudi Arabia with liberal values, a global perspective, and a very progressive agenda, I am full of hope for social change in my country, Saudi Arabia, in terms of women’s rights. My father is not a typical Saudi man; rather, he is someone who highly values women’s contribution to society and favors equal treatment of women and men. He has raised 5 children now, all daughters, of which I am the youngest. Most of my older sisters are also professionals holding or pursuing graduate degrees in their field. My own career goals have been formed against this background; and dedicating my own professional life to the empowerment of women in Saudi society stands as a tribute and token of appreciation to both of my parents. The single most important thing that my father did was to buy us a summer home in the Bay Area, a wonderful place for a little girl to grow up enjoying total freedom. Almost every year of my life, I have spent 2-3 months in our summer home in Foster City; and since adolescence, I have been exploring much of the Bay Area alone, as well as with my sisters and parents, something that I could never do in my home country of Saudi Arabia. Growing up in San Francisco in the summer time did wonders for my English; and for this I am very thankful. It is wonderful to speak English much better than almost anyone else in Saudi Arabia and it has always pleases me greatly. Being liberal minded in Saudi Arabia, however, can cause one problems and I have had my share. As well traveled as I am well read, I have also spent 10 days in Tokyo and weeks at a time in Italy, France, and England. By the time I was growing into adolescence, I was becoming very sensitive about issues of discrimination against girls and women in Saudi Arabia. I had already seen the sadness and disappointments in my 4 older sisters, each one living through the difficulties and deceptions that result from girls and women having very restricted opportunities in the KSA. These restricted opportunities are internalized by young girls, often coming to confuse what they become in reality with the way things were ‘meant to be’ rather than the product of an unjust social system. Our struggle for equality and social justice as women in Saudi Arabia, therefore, is central to my professional as well as personal identity and I hope to be accepted to your competitive program at Berkeley partly on the merits of my great passion for the civil and human rights of women in Saudi Arabia. I hope to excel in your Master in Development Practice Program at XXXX in the area of the empowerment of women, researching and writing about Saudi women as much as possible so that I will be adequately prepared to publish in this area in the future in the areas of women in workforce development, entrepreneurial training, in addition to educational access and the way in which it is related to human rights and economic justice. My sisters and I have never accepted the Saudi way of thinking about issues of gender and sexuality. In the KSA, when a woman gets harassed on the street or at the mall, many people tend to see it as her own fault because she was walking alone rather than with a male relative and/or not covering her face. For us, this is ridiculous, a great indignity for women, and we have suffered and rebelled our entire lives. What inspires me to move forward and to continue to militate for social change in the area of female empowerment is that the world is on the side of Saudi women, not the unjust system, and I hope to make the most of this solidarity at XXXX and put it to good use when I return to my country. I am most pleased that my personal history includes intensive professional experience in the area in which I hope to study since I had the privilege of completing a graduate development program sponsored by Banque Saudi Faransi, where I was rotated across a variety of key functions in the bank, learning to think creatively about banking and development and becoming highly competent across basic banking disciplines. This experience helps to prepare me for a lifetime of service on behalf of the advancement of Saudi women. The solidarity that is generated with our cause is applicable to Muslim women in general, many of whom also face repression in their home countries, places like Pakistan, Afghanistan, Iran. And I look forward to studying their stories as well as part of my XXXX experience. All of us together, we hope, will be able to earn the opportunity in the future to show how well we can perform alongside men as full partners in the struggle for development.

  • Audiology PHD Personal Statement Chinese Applicant

    Your PHD Program in Audiology at the University of XXX (UXX) is my first choice for graduate school for several reasons in addition to its sheer excellence and impressive ranking. Since I was raised in Taiwan, XXXX has become my second home, returning here for school at 17. Now 24, I will soon be completing the Bachelor’s Program in Communications Disorders at UXX and I have come to very much love my university, think of it as home, and thus ask for the honor of completing my education where I feel most comfortable. I see your program as the perfect place to grow as a successful audiologist. My undergraduate education at UXX in Communications Disorders is complemented by my 6-month internship in an Audiology Clinic in Taiwan assisting with patient care. Among the highlights of this experience was performing the pure tone audiogram (PTA) under the supervision of the Audiologist. I have also been teaching in an after-school program here in Dallas and I have served as a volunteer in a nursing home along with my church group for several years. My experiences in life have helped me to become a patient and compassionate person and I see these as most certainly among the greatest gifts of the successful Audiologist in her labor each day to do all that they can to help people to hear better. I look forward to working with people of all ages with a focus in my research on older patients since this is where the need is most concentrated. I am a young Chinese woman who is full of life and a very hard worker and I want to have a long professional lifetime that is full of both children and older people since both are an integral part of my personal professional vision for making my fullest contribution to society, especially here in America and perhaps also back in the country in which I was raised, Taiwan, at least at some point in my career. Your program will prepare me to make my fullest contribution through both research and practice to helping people to hear better through the use of cochlear implants in particular. I was born in Texas in 1991 since my father was earning his MBA at the time. When I was 4 months old, however, we moved back to Taiwan. Thus, I grew up totally Taiwanese, but enrolled at UXXX in August of 2012, fulfilling my dream. My Audiology class stole my heart and the project that I completed for this course brought me the greatest joy so I decided to make it my life work. My undergraduate years at UXX gave me a foundation to make very important contributions in my internship with the Otorhinolaryngology clinic in Taiwan. I had the enormous privilege of attending to a great diversity of patients with many different types of hearing issues in our clinic. One gentleman, for example, had great difficulty understanding people when they spoke quickly and he had struggled with this problem for many years and would often choose writing as a form of communication to compensate for his hearing problem. I thus came to investigate writing as a potential tool for the Audiologist through the use of an application on a smart phone or tablet that could interpret verbal stimulation into words and then provide a connection with a certain hearing aid through Bluetooth, so that when a person hears something, the application interprets it and displays the words in the form of subtitles. Thank you for considering my application to your program.

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I really appreciate your help in such a important work. Thank you very much for your effort. i love it very much. I will take your advice and i will tray to change some parts. once again i rely appreciate every sigle words, thank you very much. I have been accepted to the XXXX Graduate School of Social Work. I can start this Spring. Thank you for all of your help with the Personal statement that was the clincher. I really liked the paper, you did an excellent job, i cant find anything that i would change so only if you have any revision of your own, i think its good. Thank you Oh my God I am just amazed, AMAZED. Thank you so much and right now I am looking at it and it is beyond perfect but I might have one or thing revised. Thank you so much Wow, this is a powerful essay. Not only will this help me with my application, but it will set the standard of quality, reflection, and consciousness I aspire to! Amazing!!! That's what I got to say. It is incredible and you pretty much put everything I had in mind of writing, on paper. I like the way you combined and included my travels and linguistic abilities in the statement. It's EXCELLENT! I even had one of my good friends read it, and they said the same thing. I guess you have a passion for writing. Thank you very much for coming through for me. I really appreciate your time and effort. I like the statement. My reason for the pursiut of the BSN-MSN/MPH program could not have been expressed better than what you helped me put together. Thank you very much. I am very pleased with your work. I want to say thank you so much for the incredible Statement of Purpose. I am more than pleased. I appreciate your efforts in putting my complex story into just the right wording. I will make only a few modifications, a few of "my words" placed strategically here and there, but the entire content of the statement is wonderful! Thank you so much for going the extra distance for me in the word count as well. I truly appreciate every effort on your part. You have delivered not just a quality statement, but a statement I can believe in and feel represents the genuine extension of my purpose for entering the counseling field. Again , thank you for your time and obvious attention to both my life story and my future dreams. This SOP is excellent! I'm thankful that you have the gift in writing and helping so many in their future education, taking away all the stress and headaches. I guess my husband will seek your help in the near future for his MBA.Its been a great experience doing business with you and I am grateful for your professionalism. I wish you the very best in your work . Thank you do very much and may God bless you and your family.Excellent service. I will pass onto my friends. Hope to seek your guidance in the future. I absolutely loved the statement..it was impressive how you connected my life and experiences so coherently...thank you very much for your help and will definately pass on a good word about you...thank you once again... Thank you for the first draft of my statement of purpose, it really helped me to have someone else organize my thoughts. I have done some editing and will be looking at it more closely this weekend. I will be back in touch sometime next week if I need help on any revisions. Thanks again, you have been a great help to me. Good Morning, Thank you very much for this statement of purpose it is great. I have some very minor changes but that I can handle to on my own. The time and effort that you put into this really shows and I thank you so much for your efforts. This was a very well written statement of purpose.Thank you so much for the help and the advice. I will make those additions to my resume as it could only help my chances even better to get accepted into the program. Thanks again for your help and I will keep you posted after the interviews take place in December. I am sure with my experience, education, and this wonderful statement of purpose they will definitely welcome me into their program. I am so happy about the SOP. I think you are absolutely right about having a kind of non-native speaker's trademark in the SOP. I will follow your instructions and make some few additions and then get back to you. Later on, I will be requesting additional services: adapting the SOP to other programs of the same school or to a different school.

  • 1st 2 P, Diversity Statement

    I was raised in the culturally diverse environment of Southern California and have happily studied, worked and socialised with people of many cultural and social backgrounds. My practicum training has exposed me to clients of contrasting, cultures, background and types. I believe that I am culturally sensitive to an exceptional degree. I come from a culture in which the elderly are revered for their wisdom and experience. I am aware that the aging of the population may require a reordering of priorities and the resources in MFT. I can understand spoken Cantonese and Hakka. The strengths that give me a firm foundation to succeed in this field are natural empathy, an ability to listen together with sensitivity to significant non-verbal signals and an ability to remain realistic about outcomes while having the determination to pursue the best achievable.

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  • Sample 1st Paragraph for Saudi Arabian Applicant to Graduate School, Master’s Degree in Education.

    I am a Saudi Arabian man and a Mathematics teacher who looks forward to many decades to come as a leader in Education in Saudi Arabia. Earning the Masters Degree in Education at XXXX University would enable me to make my maximum contribution to progressive educational advancement, help our country to diversify in every way, economically, culturally, realizing greater levels of human rights for our people, especially women, at the same time that we are able to develop our economy in sustainable ways that will protect our unborn children.

  • Sample Statement of Purpose for the PHD in Feminist Studies, Indian Applicant

    An Indian woman who could not be more engaged with issues of women’s liberation and human rights, both in India and globally, I hope to earn the PHD in Feminist Studies at the University of XXXX so as to prepare myself for a lifetime of scholarly activity and activism in the struggle for social justice, for women, minorities, and especially the LGBT community. Next year, 2018, I will complete my MA Degree in Women’s and Gender Studies at the University of XXXX. For my Master’s Thesis, I am working on queer separatism, focusing on the radical faeries group and their stance on ecological issues. My studies of the connection between women’s issues and environmental issues and their impact on the global south, has left me convinced that the repression of sexual minorities is grounded in a larger ‘crisis of reason’ as suggested by Val Plumwood. Thus, I seek the fullest possible immersion experience at the U of X in the gambit of complicated ways in which gender and sexual orientation are related to other forms of oppression - as well as the destruction of our planetary home. I look forward to a lifetime of exploration into the cultural, political and historical foundations of privilege and power. Within time, I hope to become a distinguished expert in the application of transnational perspectives to discussions of human rights and social justice. I also hope to teach in this area in the future, in India, the USA, or both. This past September 29, 2017, the USA joined India in the group of 13 members that voted against a UNHRC resolution to denounce the death penalty for same-sex relations, while no less than 27 member-states in the council voted in favor of the resolution. The fact that both of the countries which I now consider home were part of the distinct minority that voted against standing up for LGBT rights, leaves me with the firm impression that much work remains to be done in both places. My intensive and sustained research on queer history and decolonization as a student here in XXXX will help me to hit the ground running in your program and make valuable contributions to class discussions. It would be a special honor for me as a doctoral student at the U of X to study under Dr. XXXX since I deeply admire her work in the area of indigenous pedagogies and could not be more excited about the prospect of further harnessing her methodology for the illumination of queer and decolonization perspectives. Her paper "XXXX" suggests that she could be my perfect mentor. As her student, I would be challenged most rigorously to come to grips intellectually with how necropower has and continues to work in history by racializing and sexualizing – the other. I could also not be more excited about the prospect of studying under Dr. XXXX who focuses not only on post-colonial studies but also on the specific context of South Asia. Her paper “XXXX” is of special relevance for debates concerning postcolonial perspectives, in India as in other parts of the former colonial world. Now, I understand why the majority of women in rural India do not use sanitary pads and why and how the Indian public health structure totally fails women on the bottom rungs of India’s class system. During the last year of my undergraduate studies in Economics in India, my friends and I formed a self-help group in a rural area to help women work towards the achievement of sound, sustainable, economic goals for themselves and their family. I also earned a Master’s Degree in Economics at Jawaharlal Nehru University (JNU), New Delhi, where my interest in and focus on women’s issues very much intensified. I began to learn more about the theoretical aspects of gender, especially with respect to international politics. The highlight of my last year of graduate study in India was co-authoring an academic paper: “XXXX” for my final year project, which I presented in a two-day conclave on the “Impact of Globalization on Women” organized by the National Commission for Women. I next worked as a program coordinator for a non-profit organization in Kerala to gain additional exposure to a variety of social issues impacting women. Some of the projects that I led were communication workshops for economically disadvantaged children and computer classes to enable housewives to sell handicrafts through e-commerce. In 2015, I moved to Chandigarh, where I went to work on behalf of Global Shapers, a non-profit organization specializing in women’s issues and the prevention of child sexual abuse along with treatment programs for the victims. I have contributed significantly to the organization’s efforts toward creating sexual abuse awareness programs in schools across the region. As a PHD student I plan to further elucidate how our ecological crisis is rooted in the evolution of Western philosophy and ideology. I am already heavily engaged with research on queer ecologies and queer cultures and I presented a paper “XXXX” at the 2nd International Women’s Rights Assembly in New Delhi, exploring the ways in which debates over decolonization have an impact on the articulation of and struggle for LGBT rights in India. Another project I worked on is “XXXX” which I presented at the Assemblages Conference at UXXX, based on a study of separatist lesbian movement in Oregon. “XXXX” was the title of my contribution at the 42nd National Rural Development Conference, at Jackson, TN, suggesting pedagogical practices that can be incorporated into school curriculums so as to encourage sustainable living. I thank you for considering my application to continue my studies at the doctoral level at the University of XXXX.

  • Sample 1st Paragraph Translation Masters, Somali Woman

    Currently a permanent resident of London, I have been living in Europe for the past 14 years, the Netherlands as well as the UK. I look forward to contributing to the diversity of your program as a Somali woman who was raised in Yemen. While out of practice, I speak, read, and write Dutch although not nearly as well as English. My native tongue is Arabic and my central professional dream is to build my own translation/interpretation service working mostly with issues in Arabic/English.

  • MA Translation Personal Statement Sample 1st Paragraph, Simultaneous Interpretation

    I know that many people have the ability to learn a second language to a good standard but I believe that what separates the competent from the excellent interpreter is a genuine fascination with the second language and its subtlest nuances together with an eagerness to constantly expand the depth of their knowledge. I have this kind of passion and interest in the English language. My ambition is to acquire and apply the highest level of skills that will initially enable me to undertake consecutive translation and ultimately to act as a simultaneous interpreter at conferences and it is for this reason that I am applying to one of the finest Master’s Programs in Translation in the world, XXXX University.

  • Sample 1st paragraph, MS Applied Mathematics and Statistics, Chinese

    Your MS Degree in Applied and Computational Mathematics and Statistics Program at XXXX is my first choice for graduate school because of my profound admiration for both the interdisciplinary character of your program and your emphasis on practical applications for business and commerce. I am a Chinese woman now living in America who earned her undergraduate and Master’s degrees in Spacecraft Engineering back in China. I have now been in America for 3 years. My daughter was born here and I have been a stay-at-home mom, improving my English and working at home as well. Most recently I have been analyzing data for two professors, one at Northwestern University and the other in India, in the area of Gen Y’s attitude towards Mobile Applications and In-app Advertising. Since my daughter will soon go to school, I want very much to go back to school as well.

  • Master's Statement of Purpose Applied Statistics

    The Applied Statistics Program at XXXX University is my first choice since XXXX is close to where I live and I would have the full support of my social network and support base. Thus, I would be able to take advantage of the fullest immersion experience possible, giving myself fully to Statistics 24/7/ Born and raised in China, numbers have stood at the center of my world since my childhood because Mathematics was always what I did best and still do. Since early adulthood, I have increasingly gravitated towards Applied Mathematics as a focus, especially everything having to do with Statistics. I could not be happier fully engaged in the magic world of using numbers and symbols to solve real world problems. After I graduated from high school, my family moved to Canada, and I was able to complete my undergraduate studies in Statistics, Actuarial Science, and Mathematics at the University of XXXX. Thus, I have had the opportunity to build a solid foundation in Statistics, including Advanced Calculus, Ordinary Differential Equation, Probability, Data Analysis, Multivariate Analysis, Time Series, and Stochastic Methods, etc. I graduated from UT with honors and went on to work in the banking industry. In my third year at UX, I completed an internship in the development of Marketing models at the Analytics Resourcing Center, and I dove in head into the fascinating world of Big Data. I conducted customer segmentation analysis with extremely large volumes and high dimension data, campaign analysis, and promotion design for retail chain stores using Machine Learning techniques. This experience opened up my horizons greatly with respect to advanced modeling techniques and also helped me understand how to abstract statistical models in accordance with business needs. After graduation, I worked as an Actuarial Analyst for the School Boards’ Co-operative Inc. I mastered the Mixed Effect model while working on a one-year statistical collaboration project on reduction in neuron cell experiments during my last year at UX. I now appreciate how the Mixed Effect has enormous advantage over the General Linear Model. Furthermore, by applying a Gradient Decent approach, I was able to optimize the model for my purposes and I was delighted with the results and was left feely most inspired about possibilities for applications. I soon began to realize that I have a gift for statistical modeling in detail and nothing brings me greater joy. This is where my passion lies. Currently, I work as a retail risk model developer in TD bank, using classical statistical models. Since this position requires documentation of how each statistical decision is made, I have a chance to investigate numerous details about each algorithm. The most exciting part of Statistics for me is the challenge of finding ways to harness the power of scientific data to accurately predict real-world phenomenon. I see Statistics as a science capable of overcoming all kinds of challenges in the quest to maximize the utility of information. I have experienced how advanced statistical techniques can resolve data challenges in industry. I look forward to a long professional lifetime serving as a researcher in the statistical modeling industry, discovering and resolving statistical challenges. For my purposes, Statistics is a scientific tool which harnesses the power of numbers for solving real-world problems. My diverse work experience with multiple industries has enabled me to gain exposure to a broad variety of modeling methods including but not limited to the classical linear model, machine learning and stochastic process. I have wrestled with many different kinds of data challenges from hundreds of observations that do not fit any frequently used distribution to billions of observations in thousands of dimensions. I thrive on the challenge of finding scientific ways to making less intuitive data reflect and accurately predict real-world phenomena. I have used multiple machine learning techniques in Python and R platforms; and observed the pros and cons of cases while comparing different modeling methods. I understand and appreciate how retail risk models are long-term, predictive power driven. Accuracy, explanatory power and conservatism are equally important. I fully understand how, within the range of linear models, scientific support for each decision is needed; coefficient analysis between triple or quadruple interactions must be conducted; and how the survival and loss model is often of great utility. Always inspired by and engaged with the latest research topics, reading myself to sleep almost every night, even under a full workload with constant pressure. I especially enjoy the quest to prove the usefulness of a methodology via statistical and mathematical methods. Committed, enthusiastic, and dedicated to what I love, I was given to music in my early years, since I was trained to become a professional classical pianist and came close to that dream. Now, however, while I still play sometimes to destress, my music is entirely in my head, symbols, numbers, real-world dreams in big data. Most of what I play these days is Jazz, in which I am self-educated. This inspired me to begin a non-profit music media company when I was in my 2nd year of college. I am also an accomplish programmer in R, Python and SAS. I also think of programming as part of the music that I want to make in the future. I thank you for your consideration of my application to Applied Statistics at XXXX University.

  • PHD Statistics Statement of Purpose Sample

    I see your particularly distinguished PhD Program in Statistics at the University of XXXX as the optimal springboard to launch my career, so as to maximize my contribution to the development of global society. I am highly motivated by the fact that, in the words of the Global Bank: “We are drowning in data and starving for insight.” I hope to earn the PhD at XXXX so as to become a master professional on the cutting edge of data - generated across industries, disciplines, and international boundaries. I could not be happier to be gearing up for a professional lifetime fully immersed in the mammoth task of organizing information, making it sensible, and translating it into a form that is suited to a vast array of specific purposes, especially with respect to human behavior and business trends. I see myself as an ideal fit for the program since I am profoundly drawn to the interdisciplinary nature of your program and the vast opportunities available at XXXX for participating in research endeavors on the cutting edge. I am particularly engaged with and excited about Data Mining, Machine Learning and Data Visualization. Giving my all to my projects for my classes in Statistics and Econometrics has enabled me to become adept at managing large datasets and running simulations using R and STATA. Thanks to my Computer Science classes I am now efficient in modeling data structure and algorithms using Java and Python. At Data Fest, I mastered data cleansing and sample splitting, while modeling energy consumption predictions based on numerous industrial factors. Working on a research project with Professors Tania, Trapani, and Halvorsen helped me to master the statistical analysis of given data sets of interspike-intervals based on the mathematical models suggested. I learned new methods and how to run them such as Method of Moments, Newton-Raphson Reiteration, and the Kolmogorov-Smirnov Test. I have also cultivated perseverance and find great joy in my engagement with state-of-the-art research. Since completing my undergraduate studies, for the past 3 years, I have been working as a PPC (pay per click) analyst. I run ads on Google for the company’s products and pay whenever users click ads. One of the most wonderful aspects of the PPC industry is almost everything is real time: cost, revenue, clicks and even customer data; millions of clicks are accompanied by millions of possible new customers and their data. Not only managing advertisements, I also deal with big data. I have honed my interpreting skills with real-world projects through SQL and Excel. One of my favorite projects was to analyze ad performance based on distance between the buyer’s shopping address and destination addresses where the purchased products would be in use. With the results, I built ad campaigns where different strategies where employed for different radii targets. In fact, the data that I am compiling has almost endless potential. While utilizing data is a hot topic in the online marketing industry, I have been able to find only a few tools equipped with reliable technologies that can actually help marketers at deeper levels such as reading contextual signals upon which to base predictions. I look forward very much to contributing to developments in this area in the future. I am convinced that my destiny lies in data mining, machine learning and data visualization, and I hope to immerse myself in these subjects as a graduate student. I have given countless hours to a variety of regressions models, classification methods and learning models including support vector machines. I have also made a constant effort to polish my visualization skills through Tableau, R, and Python. I have had ample opportunities to present my contributions to academic research, class projects, and workplace projects, and I increasingly appreciate how visualization is as important as the data itself since well-visualized data can be comprehended by almost any audience. While data mining and machine learning have limitless potential in countless fields, the specific area in which I would like to make my mark, beginning with research in your doctoral program at UMass Amherst, would be to develop a tool that can diagnose diseases based on individuals’ online activities including search queries and posts on social media. Ultimately, I would like to design and develop a personalized medical assistant that tailors itself to the medical needs and resources of each individual, thus increasing and enhancing access to medical advice and treatment at a reasonable cost. With an observational study I conducted as a final project for my statistics class in college, I could see that coming from a low-income family, for example, has a more significant effect on students’ academic achievements than race or even disability. I further confirmed the notion that low-income families are more vulnerable to changes in health care systems through a project for my macroeconomics class dealing with US health care system. These prompted me to include helping the least fortunate members of society to improve their circumstances as part of my own professional goals. I aspire to build other personal tools later on as well, all of them oriented towards the noble goal of helping individuals and organizations. Beginning my doctoral studies in Statistics will be the beginning of a new journey that will never end, and I wish I can start it at the Pioneer Valley. As a graduate of Smith, I am well aware of how much investment and support have been put in statistics and data science in the valley, providing students and researchers ample research opportunities. I have faith that I can continue to grow enormously and better myself personally, intellectually, and professionally, just like I did at Smith. I also firmly believe that my research can contribute to your university and academic community as well as millions of people who would benefit from the research. For all these reasons I am confident that University of XXXX is a great place for me to pursue a PhD. I thank you from the bottom of my heart for considering my application.

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