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Sample MS Financial Analysis Personal Statement of Purpose

  • Writer: Robert Edinger
    Robert Edinger
  • Jul 15, 2024
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Updated: Jan 8


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I am a young African man who relocated from Kenya to the United States in 1996. Currently, I live in New Jersey and hold a B.S. in Computer Science and an MBA from the New York Institute of Technology. I am seeking further training to realize my long-term goal of managing hedge fund investments and advising high-net-worth clients and institutions on investment strategies.


I am attracted to the XXXX for its location and mission. As a progressive, cosmopolitan individual who has explored America's East Coast, I am eager to experience the West. I value diversity and cultural celebrations and aspire to return to Africa to contribute to its economic development. Thus, San Francisco's progressive spirit and the Jesuit education's emphasis on global perspectives and nurturing leaders who can create a more humane and just world appeal to me. I hope to use my native Swahili again in Africa's economic development and look forward to engaging with the diverse financial analysis perspectives of your program's international participants.


I aim to earn a Master of Science in Financial Analysis and the Chartered Financial Analyst designation. I anticipate a rigorous education in your program, focusing on quantitative financial analysis and economics, and I am eager to learn how to apply the latest tools used by investment management professionals. My greatest passion is to contribute to the evolution of financial analysis from art to science and to master the complex analytical and quantitative methods increasingly employed in financial markets. I am applying to the Professional XXXX Program because it perfectly aligns with my interests and high level of motivation.


I am excited about your program's executive style and its coordinated, sequential approach to the tools and knowledge essential for becoming a CFA. I foresee a long and fruitful career as a lifelong student of financial and quantitative analysis. I believe my seven years of professional experience in finance and accounting enhance my candidacy for your program. Over the years, I have balanced full-time studies with full-time work in various roles, including general ledger administration, budgeting and forecasting, financial modeling and analysis, project implementation and management, month-end close, and leadership through mentoring team members. I have honed my communication and investigative skills, and my analytical and problem-solving abilities are my greatest strengths. I have learned to be adaptable and flexible in response to evolving corporate philosophies.


Currently, I am eager to challenge myself further with your program as I seek new heights. I am a competitor who strives for excellence and never settles for mediocrity. My most significant contribution to society would be to apply my quantitative and analytical skills to manage financial information and assist clients and organizations in solving business problems. In time, I look forward to taking on leadership roles in financial institutions, helping nonfinancial professionals gain deeper insights into global financial markets.


Although I have not traveled extensively, my 18 years in Kenya have sparked a deep interest and concern for global issues. I possess a solid understanding of the global economy and look forward to enhancing my skills to become a more effective, efficient, and productive participant in shaping new patterns in the global economy, with a particular focus on my native Africa.


Since September 2006, I have been working as a Senior Financial Analyst at XXXX Companies, a leading global information services provider catering to the financial services, education, and business information markets worldwide. I have gained valuable insights into global thinking at XXXX, and I hope to share these experiences with other graduate students at USF soon. I am particularly excited about how your program leverages the cultural, intellectual, and economic resources of XXXX. Your program offers an ideal opportunity to enrich and strengthen the common good through reasoned discourse in global financial analysis. Thank you for considering my application.


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Cathy Marsh
Dec 13, 2025
Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

This statement is a compelling and well‑structured presentation of a candidate whose academic preparation, professional experience, and global vision align seamlessly with advanced study in financial analysis. The applicant, a young African man originally from Kenya and now living in New Jersey, situates his pursuit of a Master of Science in Financial Analysis within a broader trajectory of intellectual growth and social responsibility. His journey reflects resilience, ambition, and a clear commitment to using financial expertise as a tool for both personal advancement and economic development in Africa.

The narrative is distinguished by its balance of academic achievement and professional experience. With a B.S. in Computer Science and an MBA from the New York Institute of Technology, the applicant has…

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