Master Degree Architecture Personal Purpose Statement
- Robert Edinger
- Apr 16, 2024
- 3 min read
Updated: 6 days ago

When I first encountered Marcel Breuer’s St. John’s Abbey, I was captivated, standing still as if time had stopped, absorbing its essence. During my initial visit to the College of St. Benedict/St. John’s University, the joy and happiness I experienced felt almost dreamlike, leaving a lasting impression. The modern yet simple design of St. John’s Abbey, with its smooth surfaces and expansive interior free of central columns, along with the dynamic play of light through abstract shapes in the colored glass, brought me immense joy. Having traveled extensively, I have always sought architectural masterpieces that inspire and motivate me.
My first passion was landscape design, which combined my love for nature and architecture. However, after years of working as a landscape designer, both independently and with a firm, I am eager to advance and focus solely on architecture. I see architectural design as my calling and the greatest contribution I can offer to society. I fervently hope that the future of architecture, both in the USA and globally, will become more energy-efficient. The United States, with its advanced building technologies and materials, is poised to lead this initiative. I am thrilled that green buildings are already incorporating new technologies and materials, and I hope this becomes the norm.
A few years ago, my partner and I started a design firm in New York City, focusing on interior and architectural design. After thoroughly researching graduate programs, I am convinced that your program at ____, with its rigorous curriculum and serene location, is the perfect fit for me. I believe ____ will inspire me to make my fullest contribution to architecture. The extensive resources of Yale and the surrounding area, along with the studio classes and the presence of esteemed architects who have taught there, make ____ my dream school.
My deep passion for green, sustainable, non-toxic, and recyclable design began long ago and flourished in my landscape design work. Now, with my focus primarily above ground, my professional principles remain unchanged. I strive to honor the earth in all my endeavors, whether designing at ground level or building upwards, ensuring sustainability and environmental friendliness in both the structures and the land they occupy.
I am passionately committed to sustainable design and development, viewing sustainability as the future of architecture. I often consider sustainability from the very beginning when deciding to take on a project, always seeking ways to direct my contributions towards sustainable goals.
I strongly believe that as designers and architects, we have a duty to educate our clients and society about what is best for our community. I aspire to be an architect who champions social responsibility in creating new spaces, both private and public. Ultimately, our long-term path forward is to make green and sustainable choices the most valued and cherished. I see myself as a leader in this movement, proudly advocating for this cause.
I believe the USA, particularly through its leading universities like Yale, has the best opportunity to combat the toxic contamination threatening our world. Positioned between ____ and New York City, I am well-placed to seize these critical years to contribute to saving our planet and its inhabitants. I request acceptance to Yale to fully realize my potential in addressing these challenges. Thank you for considering my application.
Master Degree Architecture Personal Purpose Statement


